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That was very hot!

Are we going to see Snape in action?? I wouldn't mind that at all.

Keep up the good work!

I am in desperate need of an update on this lovely story. Cliff hangers kill me and I have been checking fairly often to see if you have updated and it just kills me to not know what comes next. Keep up the amazing work!

I am enjoying your story very much. You have a great start and I love how rotten you have made
Lucius Malfoy. I can hardly believe this is your first story.
Here are a few suggestions for tidying up the text a little.
beautiful: long blonde hair = should be "blond" when refering to a male.
stairs to the defence against the= defense
YOU BIGHT ME = bite
favourite pass time of Potter = favorite
when she finally realised = realized
Felling quite disgusted = feeling
back up her pretences, she started = pretenses
who was as defenceless as she = defenseless

Oh My...! What's happened to the innocent, childlike, sweet Ophelia I knew? ^^" You've grown up... my little girl! anyway... that was damn scary! don't misunderstand me: i like it!! i like the way you write and i want to know how it goes on... Severus won't do anything wrong, or?? Girl: heal as soon as you can and post more!

Wow this is a wonderful story!
Wander what Snape will do when he sees the new

Chapter 4: A dastardly Lucius. I suppose now that he's raped Hermione it would be difficult if not impossible to sell them as a couple but that's quite all right. He and she don't always have to be together in the end. He's running much more true to the Lucius Malfoy that Jason Isaacs keeps telling interviewers the character is like. Totally evil, arrogant and irredeemable. The story is interesting and pitting Lucius against the three teens makes for a lot of possibilities. I wonder what Severus will do with Hermione? Guess I have to wait and see. Update soon, please!

Update soon please! Cliff hangers kill. It's a wonderful story!

boy lucius is so very cruel in this story. it makes me think of how j.k. rowling propoble thinks of him at least to some extent. i really am dying to know what severus will do is he part of the order or a d.e. and how will he react to hermione? well don't make us wait too long to know the answers!

OOH so is Severus going to have her? Or is he going to help her?

Can't wait... I love Severus....

sick., just twisted, update soon ^^