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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I'm truly amazed at your ideas... it's not just that you use an excellent language, but that you keep Lucius as the man he is, too. You just make a reader love to hate him and vice versa. ;) One of the best stories including Lucius so far, I dare say. :)
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, my love!!! Well done again!!
It's really good and I want to know more, of course!! Post as soon as you can but do not forget to think carefully of how you want the story to go on... in my opinion, anyway... you're thinking in the right way!
*Advice: thinking is ok and useful, but use a bit of istinct, too!
It's really good and I want to know more, of course!! Post as soon as you can but do not forget to think carefully of how you want the story to go on... in my opinion, anyway... you're thinking in the right way!
*Advice: thinking is ok and useful, but use a bit of istinct, too!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Every story needs an interim on exposition. This was interesting. I did that with my first fanfic, tried to keep every character in line with the books, it is hard; which is why I stray now... it's so much easier!
Harry/Ginny - YAY!!! Love that couple. Ginny's cool! I hope she'll get to kick some soon.
Harry/Ginny - YAY!!! Love that couple. Ginny's cool! I hope she'll get to kick some soon.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy an evil Lucius an much as your story.
I guess he won't kill her, will he?
I guess he won't kill her, will he?
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you fell better,I love how you have Lucius pertraied,he doesn't pass to me as the lovey dovey type,and I don't know if he would ever have any real fellings for Hermione or anyone.Loved the Severus part by the way,I hope you keep his and Lucius,s realtinship the same that was funny and how long time best friends are.I can't wait for more.You're doing I good job keeping everyone in characheter by the way.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. Trapped and abused. Bad bad Lucius. good chappie thouhg. Hope u feel better soon. Update soon Please.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better! I think you portrayed Severus perfectly.
I hope that you continue to recover from the flu and feel as though you can write more.
I hope that you continue to recover from the flu and feel as though you can write more.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, such a good story. I can't wait to read more, I hope you are writing more for us.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ... so he sent back for her thing well there is a good start.. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now
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