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It's such a shame that you didn' continue this story. It was such a great work. You should have continued it 'cause I think there are many people who would have loved to read more from this story.

This is so stupid it's almost funny but it's not. It's just ridiculous. You just took the entire plot of The Secret Garden (you didn't even change the title!) and put Harry Potter in there.

i really like this story. and i hope you update more soon.

kumori

This is awsome! I adore this story. Only two chapters, and I'm absolutely hooked.

Quick questions/comments: You have 'slave' listed under the warnings, do you mean how Harry is currently a slave, prisoned in the garden, or will Draco or Harry be a slave to the other or someone else later in the story? Also, is there any way for Harry to communicate with Draco before Lucius dies? I'm trying to picture them forming a relationship as Draco grows up- it would probably help them emotionally, anyway. If the slave bit refers to later, who will be who's slave? I ask because I'm squicked by sub!Harry, so I'm really anxious to see which this is. I love how the plants outside the garden can communicate- does Harry even know it's happening? He seemed very depressed during his scene, and he didn't give any indication that he knew one of his people were always watching over him. If Harry is a prince, is there a king/queen? Will they be James & Lily? Or will you have the ruling body of the fae organized the way where even if the monarch is top dog-so to speak- they can't be called 'king' or 'queen' until they're married, so it's having a prince or princess ruling the land? If Draco noticed the ivy that grew overnight, will he ask about it, or assume that it just came from wizarding magic? I like the thought of Draco watching the flowers bloom and Ben saying that the color means Harry likes him. Okay, before I get carried away and write your story for you, I'll sign off- update again soon!!!!!

~Hazel

Love the way you updated chapter 2. Looking forward to more soon.

I like this story a lot so far! Normaly I hate when authors change Harrys name and sometimes drop the story all toghther. But if you had something close to it or his real name be harry but he is called by his nickname I would definitely enjoy that!

Update soon!

I am going to assume that this chapter was meant to be longer. When there is more to read then please contact me.

it's really good. i like how it is truning out and can't wait for you to do more. and on the whole name change thing for harry...i don't mind as long as it is harry, but i don't think it could be in the harry/draco arc. but you could have his real name be something wonderfully creative and have the nick-name be harry. but you don't have to. it was just a thought. and another one is you can write the chapter out on some kind of word doc. and then post the whole thing when the chapter is done. well i'll stop talking now. hope you update soon.

kumori

Hey, Thanatos Phoenix , this is the cutest story ever. So sweet and romantic. I am really enjoing it. Thank you.

Hey. I agree with you I think Harry's name shouldn't be Harry. Pick something wonderfully creative. I love the story and I hope you can update again soon!