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sorry but i completely agree with him...
truck-load of cum yeah thats super sexy.

Hump me Harry lol nice.

people like to put down other people down for thing they cant do... i think you story was good i happen to like creative writting and that is what it is and dont let other people make you feel bad about what you write because if you enjoy it who care what a few unhappy people say.. anyway look at it this way if miss rowlings would have listened to the critics there would be no harry potter and how sad would that be?

I liked this fic.;-) It was fun reading how you "described" some of the attributes of the human progenetic structure. ;-) If any medical student would use the words you used in this fic, they would all have a good laugh both int he o.r and classrooms. ;-) Its quite amazing to be both funny and "instructional" at the same time, you know. ;-)

*Sigh* I apologize for hurting your feeelings. I really am sorry for that. Your response certainly put me in my place, so I'll be brief here.

In my review I may have been harsh, but I was still trying to give you con crit. The whole point of me giving you examples of your euphemisms and metaphors was to let you see what kind of reaction people may get from it. There is such a thing as being too colorful in setting the imagery and if you go too far with it, like I believe you did, it can cheapen what you are trying to relate.

I have written fiction, and betaed for several authors in the past. The whole purpose to giving con crit - and believe me I have RECEIVED plenty - is to help you become a better writer, not to belittle you. And obviously I failed in my delivery.

If you aren't interested in con crit, ignore all the cranky old "Simon Cowells" like me and just enjoy your writing. ;)

But if you are interested in making the most of your "negative" reviews, I suggest you get a thicker skin and take heed to the ones that may have a grain of truth to them.

Yes, so much for brief.

Take care and good luck on your future writings.

Nate

alright, i liked the story, i thought it was fairly well written and i never have a problem with pure animalistic smut. But hun, you need to learn to take constructive criticism. Not everyone is going to like what you write and that's something you have to square away with. Instead of getting insulted, LISTEN to what people say and think about how you could improve your next story. You'll never make it as a writer online or in the real world if you expect nothing but polite encouraging comments from everyone, because that's not how it works.

HOT & SEXYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it

It was utterly FANTASTIC!

I really liked the dirtiness of it

I like your writing style, it is just as you said

yea so i was reading your reviews of your reviews and i totally agree with them. Good plot idea but you went crazy with the imagery to the point where the story became either funny our painful to read. They abruptly disturbed the flow, constantly.

The fic was pretty good...I dunno about the "truckload" part as that seems like it's a bit much for one guy to cum, however it's not too bad.

Anyways write other fics too and see if they can become great stories...after all you have the beginning for a great talent.

It's a shame that you are deleting reviews if they are not exclusively a praise of your writing. Your word choice is too cheap for a first time. The hole plot is unrealistic. Don't get me wrong, the story is not bad, but it is not perfect too. Hope you are not deleting this review too.