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Okay I just came across your story and I actually like it. The sexual tention between Harry and Hermione was a great thought on your part. The way it finally exploded and them going at it hard and fast was a good touch too. I hope you continue this story. Mabye have Hermione find out she is pregnant a few months? Just a thought. 

Well I'm not sure about anyone else but I actually liked the way you wrote this story. It was sexy and alluring...granted the characters were OOC and a bit crude in their language, however I expected that as you warned the readers at the beginning. This is still one of my favorite lemons of this pairing. The way you describe Hermione and Harry is extremely well delivered.

First: I LOVE your Fic!
Second: PWP and OOC ==> you warned us.
Third: Harry with more muskles as he should have... who cares! (besides... Isn't this also OOC? I'm not sure... should be!)
Forth: Your overdeskribed? well... jes. A little. But... I REALLY HATE UNDERDESKRIBLED SO CALLED PWP FFs (I found some... horrible... I still have nightmares about them... (ok, that's a joke, no nightmares...))
I haven't got any problems with your describtions eighter.
(I'm not native english speaker, but german. Still I haven't got any problem with your inventive use of english. Good one by the way.)

Absolutely loved it. Plain and simple.

Hi, I'm Lauren and I read the reviews chapter and what some of the people said shocked me. Personally, I think your story is very true to what teenagers (horny teenagers, as the characters in this story most certainly are, hehe) would be thinking and wanting during sex. Not all first times are loving, slow moments and you show this in the story.
It also projects very erotic imagery which is good for those who want to get into the mood of the story. I personally don't find anything wrong with this story, also the use of the english language is much more advanced than most other stories on this site.
This story is good, it's a portrayal of teenagers, which is the whole point.
Also, I am 100% serious in this review and am not bullshitting you at all. I enjoyed the story, it was entertaining and it made me watch the last two Harry Potter movies religiously because in my opinion HARRY AND HERMIONE SHOULD BE TOGETHER... but that's just me, lol. You can reach me at ulliels_veela@hotmail.com if you want to chat.
~Lauren

There is a time and place for PWP and you delivered in spades. THANK YOU! It's great to read something this hot and intense. We all *want* Harry and Hermione to be able to have that kind of sex together - and it was wonderful to read your take on what would happen if they were given the chance to do so.

Excellent job. Thank you!

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Hi, I've read Party of Two so many times now, I love it. I can't stand how some people post really hurtful things in their reviews that are by no means constructive, lol.
I think you wrote a really raunchy, sexy story that I enjoyed. I personally am a fan of the H/Hr fanfiction myself, so I don't know if I'm biased or not.
Just so you know, my email is wrong, it's not actually bobmonkey@hotmail.com, that's my old one so if you try to reply I won't get it.
And I loved the responses to reviews chapter, that made me crack up laughing!
Keep up the good (hot) work,
Your friend Lauren

Heya HTL, I loved the story it was very good, fun and hot to read. And ofcourse I agree with you on some of the reviews and you know the thing is ppl don't like to think when they're reading something and that is what leads to some distasteful review.

You know what...? You should read my story(it's not finished yet), then read the reviews I got for it this far and tell me what you think.

Anyway I hope you continue to write despite *rolls eyes* some reactions...

Bye.

I know this story has been up for a while, but I just wanted to say that this is one of my foavorite stories. Yes, its a PWP. Yes there is some OOC. But this story is well written. SOme of the constructs in the story give it a nice, light touch. I like that this story doesn't take itself too seriously. Your writing is excellent. Please keep up the good work. If you ever decide to do another chapter to this story, I think it would be well recieved.

This was a good story!