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for Battle of Dark vs. Light

by Crazy4Malfoy

person Lyssa
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
do continue...you have me hooked
person paula
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi.Nice work!Actually,at first I thought that it will be Hermione/Snape so I was confused but then Lucius came and all is clear:)Interesting start. I`m looking for more.Best wishes...paula
person Sampdoria
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now here is a story that surely got my attention! If the rest of the story are as good as the first chapter, I am going to have a wonderful time following it. Give us lots of updates soon.... :-))
(And don't forget to update your other story too, I like your RL/HG story too)
You could very quickly become one of my favourite authors with stories like this!!!
person angel
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great.. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person lisa
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love it. Awesome. Dark Harry, worse than dark the new DARK lORD. Ohh dear Poor Hermione. that Ron is a useless git but perhaps he's on Harry's side? I love delicious Severus and Lucius. and it's nice to see a human Lucius. I imagine he has 2 sides like Severus his ok side and his bastard side. Lol this should be quite interesting. Can't wait for more. more more more please. and I hope your updates are soon. waiting is so hard especially when you are vested in a good story. but lol rl has priority so I just will wait and check back. I can't wait to see what happens since Hermione was just alone with Harry lol. he probably could risk it so soon. love it please update soon.
person LadyErinSnape
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... Harry as the new Dark Lord and Ron as a jerk, yep I can see both (well Ron in particular).

A good start to the fic. You set up Hermione's lifestyle well (especially with her being a working mother and having to pretty much do everything on her own).