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well don't give up you have the making of a GREAT story. suggestions: 1-have a friendship/relationship starting with lucius and hermione and the children. 2-maybe have lucius have his banster/lawayer helping hermione with the trail. 3-give us a little on lucius' part how is at teaching, if the students like or hate him, how he interacts with the other students, etc. 4-have some other interactions with other students and teacher and teachers with other teacher. 5-(last one -k-)show a class in session hermione's or lucius' or even another teachers with one of them (lucius or hermione) interrupting them with a problem or whatever. so that is my two bits now it is up to you and that wonderful writers creativity!!

Awe...that was cute

Ohhh noooo Ron is a huge git. Poor Hermione. I am sure she will find a way around that law. I hope. And awwwww Lucius was cute. Can't wait for more. More more more please. and I imagine either Ron keeps trying to irritate her or he just attacks her and maybe uses imperio since Harry wants her right? or perhaps Harry just does it hissef making Ron another Wormtail. I thought the trial would be next. I'd definitely love to see more Lucius and Severus. They are my faves. goodluck. Please update soon.

Dude, I can tell you what I want. I want a kiss damnit! And for Ron to get his ass kicked! Hopefully by Lucius! That would be hot. Just cause Lucius is so damn hot! LOL!

This chapter was kick ass. Lucius rolling around laughing, that would be some site to see! I liked that, and I totally thought it was cute!

I can not wait fot more of this story, I am so hooked in it!

PEACE♥

Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

ohh noo i hope lucius will help her keep her kids ... man ..please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

@1 awesome story so far can't wait for more

ew,ew, ew... you had to leave it there, and it just started! OMG! So hooked!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue soon. I hope your muse has carried on for a new chapter soon! I can not believe how sucked into this story I already am. This is just so great. This has yet to be done with Lucius/Hermione, and that is what makes it more cool! Something NEW! YES! LOL!

Please update soon, and I have no problem beggin. *gets on knees* PLease... LOL! Wow, I have not been this excited about a Lucius/Hermione story in so long. They seem to have been lacking. Some are good, but I just love orginal work the best.

And this Harry being the new Dark Lord, wow, and at least Hermione is not so naive in this one not to see something is already going on with Harry. And Lucius there to protect her, awesome!
And I like Severus' silent interest in her, I hope they become friends. I would like that... that would be nice.

PEACE♥
Isa

YAY! OMG I love fics with Harry as the evil git. Great start. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

okay to a certin extent of harry potter the new bad guy is just laughable and i have to creapy. i can't wait to see what you will do in this story! i really liked what lucius said about hermione's girls' being the most beautiful. what is with severus and staring at hermione? and does that little tiffany have seer powers? okay enough questions for now-update!!!