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Damn...is there any possibility for this to be updated in the near future? I'm loving this fic!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I love this story so far

i see that hermione start having feelings for malfoy. while trying to keep her kids safe. she also figures that harry is the new dark lord

still waiting.....

ohhhh....interesting......and Ron is such a prat! and I'm guessing Harry"dark Lord jr" Potter's right hand dufus.

i like his, update soon!

Are you kidding??? There are so many ways you can do this. She could chase him down, and thank him... She could go to Dumbledore and let him fill her in on why he seems so changed... Uhm... She could search him out herself and speak with him about why he's being so kind... She could ask him to help her figure out how to battle Ron for custody... Do any of those ideas help? I really like this story idea as I do believe that even if Lucius was a git about mudbloods, he does love his son, So I can imagine he would have a soft spot for Hermione's children!

More soon please? ShilohDarke

Just Cannot wait for more. It's such an excellent story.

Still like your story after the seccond chapter. You wanted input on where to go next, for what it is worth, here is mine: First of all, if you haven't already, you have to decide if Harry is truely a new dark lord on his own accord, or if he is posessed with a part of Voldemort. Seccond, does Ron knows and approves. And third, and for me most important; don't let the children be harmed, nothing will in my mind be an "off-putter" for a story as a case where such small children are harmed. Hermione has to win the trial about the children, she is the smartest witch of her age, and as you made her say; She fought Voldemort, figthing Ron should be a lot easier. She could need Lucius help I think, or the combined help of Lucius, Severus and Dumbledore. It rather depends on how long you intend this story to be, if you let Ron have the children, the story must come to an end rather quick in my opinion, reading chapter after chapter with Ron and Harry having the children would not be my cup of tea.
I have read a lot of stories lately where Hermione are pictured more as a Huffelpuff who helplessly endures all kind of cruelties and still loves and forgives all the terrible things and betrayal done to her in the end. It anoys me, she was sorted to Gryffindor and is as earlier mentioned smart. Please give me a Hermione who not only fight for her children like the lioness she is, but also stand tall and strong against thoose who tries to hurt her. By all means, let her be smart enough to get all the help she can get, but please, please, please don't make her a person to pity and who everyone can push around as they like.