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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person juls
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL mother your dress is buttoned wrong... omg I loved it. HUG ~~juls
person kymmy
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.... I was waiting and waiting so patiently for this update (not!) and look what we got. What a great chapter. Can't wait for the next update.... I think we've already established how patient I am :-)
person Avanell
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was brilliant! I loved the scene with Hermione and Lilah...and draco watching was perfect...and then a touch of smut...but this chapter got me thinking again that Harry might be a good person to talk with Lilah...about his aunt, uncle and cousin and how they treated him (even worse since he had to take their abuse).
person BuffyXO
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a snarky little git! I love snarky!Draco as much as I enjoy the pairing between Narcissa and Severus. Again, another great chapter. I just hope that you are thinking of writing a sequel or spin-off of this story that focuses on Narcissa and Severus -- I would love to know what went on there to change them from quarreling acquaintances to well, how Draco found them. Anyhow, please consider a sequel?? Pretty, pretty please?
person kate
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok the level of happiness I felt with the 'fucking bell' line was too good. I loved the chap and can't wait to see what's next
person Liz
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Marti;
hilarious chapter!!! Glad that Hermione and Lilah are getting along
person Alyson Diaz
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Lilah's safe and sound. ha ha, snape and narcissa. looks like draco got a bit of his own medicine with what happened with adrianna.
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwe
Cute little thing with Hermione and Lilah
I hope they can become a family
Lilah seems to really need a female role model
Ewww...
Snape and Narcissa
Bad dirty thoughts
Thought I saw it coming though
But still,
Wrong
haha
Good chapter
Thanxx for updating so soon
Keep the good chapters coming

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
person votehermione
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome chap!