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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person Anon
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww so sweet. I love this fic. :) Keep up the great work.
person lovelie_cake
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While I absolutely adore your story, Thestrals cannot be seen unless the person has seen someone die. Therefore, it wouldn't make sense for Lilah to see the Thestrals and therefore hide from them. Theorectically, Hermione could see them, as she saw Ron die and maybe other during the war, but it wouldn't make sense for most people to see them.

Otherwise, your story is amazing! I love it!
person skye
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*S.N.O.R.T*!!!!! Snape and Narcissa On Ricketty Table! okay likely a nice solid piece of wood, but it wouldn't fit in the acronym! Poor Draco...realizing "old folk" can have sex too! lol!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it, can't wait for more
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh la la. Great chapter. :) Can't wait to read more.
person angel
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm who know it could last longer .... and she got off easy .. i love it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person natalie
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i had a feeling something between severus and dracos mom was gonna happen its only natural lol thin line between love and hate and u throw in alcohol ITS EVEN THINNER! lol
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Draco is going to give that Muggle woman a sound thrashing in the name of his daughter. Would serve her right to, any woman who would abandon their child like deserves everything that they get.
person angel
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ oh man .. narcissa and sev.. that was great .. im glad mione was there to to help lilah out .... hmm is draco going to tell mione what he saw in sev's office.. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person kelfer23
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just found your story yesterday, and I love it! I'm sad it's almost over though... :( Lol. Anyway, just wanted to say great job!
P.S. I love Draco's parting shot at Narcissa...oh the terror of walking in a parent in mid-screw! Ack!