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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person Zyx
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so good :O
Never really thought about it that way but getting angry makes for some pretty good sex apperantly :P
person Lilium
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story! I love how you've portrayed everyone in it. :)
I can't wait to see what Draco does to Alicia *evil grin*
So excited =P

person Carmen
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. The last scene was so funny, but I really like the way Mione handled the situation. Very well done.

Drop me a line
person Catstaff
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an "Awwww!" moment with Hermione and the kids! Draco's definitely grown up at last. As for Narcissa and Severus, I'm not quite sure whether to be happy for them, or as squicked as Draco was walking in on them, lol! I guess you're never old enough to deal gracefully with the fact of your parent actually having a sex life.

~Catstaff
person Maegan
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I'm sorry i haven't reviewed before, in all honesty the review button has not been working for me, keeps saying error and it wasn't just for your story don't worry. BUT now it is working so here i am!

I LOVE this story, you have no idea! It's so well written!

Poor Lilah...i feel for the girl. I've been in a similar situation with my Dad...he's a right ass hole if you ask me. But anyways...I'd like to kick Draco's ex wife's arse, what a...*mumbles, mutters* RJ is just the cutest...mini Ron.<3

Well off i go! Hope for another update soon(though im not concerned)

Fair writing!
person tory
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have just gotten to read this, after having it bookmarked for the longest time. I love it, every time there is a new chapter up, i reread the entire story, because i love it so much.
keep up the awesome work!

tory
person Avanell
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so sweet and wonderful! Yes, some more lemons please. But I'm still enjoying everything else :) I had to wait through cooking dinner and watching numbers before reading (boyfriend over, too...) Keep it up!!!
person juls
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice reunion. hehe love? YAY!!
person Luthi
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooooooooo cute!!!
More, more, MORE, please!
I've been meaning to ask for quite a while - what's a rugrat? Why does Draco call Lilah that? I mean, I know what a rug is, I know what a rat is, but somehow this doesn't seem to work ;-) Sorry if this is really a foolish question, I've just been soooo curious...

Love,
Luthi
person Majikwitch
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, great job!