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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person Avanell
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooo!!! Darned computers! Okay, was hoping Draco would see the little Weasley's first, but won't he be in for a shock? Does he know about Ron yet? Can't wait for you to retype the other chapters...I know how frustrating that can be :)
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter that leaves me anticipating the next!
person Avanell
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was going to add a couple of thoughts, but not sure if I remember them both :) Will Draco see the kids first? Won't it be something, to see how close they are with Severus? Then find out who they are? And what happened to (sniff!) Ron.

And what is Lilah like? Where is her mother? Speaks volumes that Draco has custody, but then again, that could go in several directions.
person juls
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was sad as hell. and I liked your Ron, too. Reading on.
person angel
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think sev is right.. hmm i can wait in till the to meet....please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon ....later for now

angel
person juls
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... and EEK on losing the rest.
person Cheri
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed this chapter and hope to see many more soon.
person vic
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice start, go on fast!
person skye
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.. the transition in Hermione's attitude to Malfoy from frozen to boiling missed the warm part but hey.... a nice steamy Draco/Hermione scene makes up for it....
person cateye
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start,who would'nt want to shag Draco I can't wait to see what happens next.