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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person BuffyXO
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off, I hope your son is doing better. I could not imagine the stress you are under when your child is sick to the degree of being hospitalized. My thoughts and prayers really go out to you and your family. Secondly, I am so happy when you update your story. Your characterizations are so realistic, I forget that I am reading fiction! Keep on updating, because I cannot wait to see which house Rianna will be sorted into.
person natyslacks
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh another good chapter, I laughed out loud when Draco saw Hermione, I see what you mean by it being lemonade. However it was still good and very well written.
Wouldn't it be funny if Hermione returned the favour and walked in on Draco, whilst muttering her name while fantasising Haha!
Oh I loved how you've made both children find their parents 'un cool' it made me smile because it's so very true to life. And how Snape is all soft, because thats just cute ^_^
Anyway update soon please!
Love Natalie
person angel
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man poor draco ... hmm it will be something to read when they go though the sorting ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooo, i cant wait for the sorting!
person Avanell
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter...but I'm still waiting on the edge of my seat! Where will his daughter be sorted? Please update again asap!!!
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person tank
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love how snape and draco have changed over the years, very very good!
person BuffyXO
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marti:

You have done an excellent job with this story. I have enjoyed reading about the misadventures of Hermione and company post-Hogwarts. I even cried when Ron died. Keep up the great work, I cannot wait and see where Adrianna gets sorted. I have a feeling that you are leaning toward Slytherin, but I still am anticipating your next chapter. Thanks for updating and keeping your story going despire computer problems. Many other authors would have given up and left us all hanging. I am so happy that you are not like that. Again, keep up the great work!
person Donavon
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful chapter, loved the ghost of Ron, hope to read more soon. Cannot wait for the
first meeting with Draco. Best wishes, Donavon.
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update