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Hey my dear, I'm totally loving this story; I would have reviewed earlier, but I though one had to register for that! Today I realised that one did not. Anyway, I just want to lend you my support, and to tell you that keep up the GREAT work. You're likely to hear from me again! Once again, thanks for the entertainment. - RP

please update

I cannot believe that you considered stopping this story, because I have enjoyed each bit you have faithfully posted. I love how realistic their emotions are and that you have taken a chance in creating flawed, realistic characters. So many people create romanced versions of the HP characters that their fiction ceases to be interesting. However, that is not the case in your writing and better yet, in this story.

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Now for my ideas, wouldn't someone have seen their tabletop exhibition? I also thought it was ironic that Draco chose the Gryffindor table, which just shows how deeply she has hurt him. He wants to deface her subconsciously for turning her back on him at school and then keeping her "little" secret from him. Also, are you hinting at a possible RJ and Lilah flirtation? I hope not, but that wouldbe an interesting twist in things. I would also love it if you explored Snape's side of this, even if he just gave them advice, I think his pointed reflections would be very amusing and may help Draco through his rage (and I suspect heartbreak too).

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Anyhow, keep up the AWESOME work! If I could write as well as you, there would be a whole lot more Draco and Hermione stories out there!

It's beautiful, Marti, can't wait for the update. =)

I really REALLY really like this story, its so great, I cant wait to see if they tell her in a month or maybe even sooner. I cant wait to see her reaction if she doesnt already have some sort of idea forming in her precious little head. I wonder were RJ was that hsi door was closing so slowly. Cant wait to see whzt youa re doing with that, and the Lemon, Wow how hot was that! Angry sex is the best sex! please update soon!!!


Magzie

Yay lemons and what better way to take out your frustrations than vigorous sex. Only to be Hermione for that lil part lol. Indeed Draco is still pissed and he has a right to be. and Hermione may be scared but she needs to face up to what she's done and let her daughter know. She could have done it when she was little and avoided the whole turmoil all together. Now its face the music time and she's scared which I would be too. But the most amazing thing is she has Draco right there wanting to be a complete family. even though he is angry with her for denying him 11 years of his daughter's life. However to be fair Draco could have tried harder to make her listen instead of letting her go. Good chappie. Quite steamy. loved it. more more more more. Please update soon.

Wow Chapter 14 was perfect. This story just gets better and better. Can't wait for more.

I enjoy how quickly you update your story.I had just finished reviewing Ch.14 to have chapter 15 appear. I can't wait to find out how RJ reacts to what he heard. And oh when they tell the girls the truth. OH that is going to be so exciting. Keep up the great work.

LOL Harry doesn't even have to play matchmaker for them. Draco's gonna take her mind, heart, body, and soul. Yeppie! I still can't wait to see how RJ takes this after over hearing his mum and Harry. Or the girls. OMG sisters. God here's hopeing that doesn't turn into a cat fight.

Wow! That was quite the ending and a good sign of things to come. Again, thank you, thank you, thank you for updating so frequently. I love that you give us great chapters and do not make us wait until we get X number of reviews or just post once a week/month. By that time, I will have forgotten where the previous chapter left off or even the overall plot. Again, thank you for that and writing characters in cannon, well except for Hermione sleeping with Draco out of nowhere ... maybe you can explain that in chapters to come. As always keep up the fabulous work!