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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person Heather
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the story so far. Who is rj gonna tell? Like the daily prophet or just a friend or some thing? goo job and stuff and keep going!
person juls
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... good chapter. Wonder who RJ is going to talk to? Wonder what he knows... hmmmmm intriguing!
person Ryoko
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really great....i check for updates often and i can't wait for the next chapter!!
person strangerdanger89
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awsome! I lov the story
that is cool I want to be a mom someday me and my boyfriend want to get married but he wants to wait
I keep telling him I want kids... he sighs and changes the conversation
anywayz this is good I like how you make the story move along with out skiping anything needed
it has a great flow from chapter to chapter

kay well I'll check back later
strangerdanger89
person Avanell
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What was he going to tell Lilah?!! Oh, I'm dying here now...Can he see the resemblance? Or wait...he heard something! I forgot! Glad you brought up that other point ;) Lilah certainly wouldn't be there, maybe not RJ, either. And what are Draco and Hermione telling 'everyone' so soon? I almost thought a month had gone by!
person Rosamund
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was sinfully wonderful! I loved how he turned the situation to include some "hot" moments between them. I can see his reasons for wanting her to know sooner, but Hermione still has a point...she is going to be hurt rather painfully, unless they make it easier on Adrianna somehow. And how exactly will the two "sisters" get along? I hope Lilah looks up to her, before she finds out, but poor RJ...he will have difficulty with this info as well.

BTW: Was that you who reviewed one of my stories? If so, I did try what you said when I posted the last chapter, and again with the new one. it didn't work. I found the site with tech advise, and they made it sound like I should be able to...I tried again. No luck. I e-mailed someone, perhaps they will help. Thanks for the review!
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so afraid someone was going to walk in on them! I can't wait for your next update!
person tank
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cant beat angry sex i tell ya!
person angel
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. how is she going to take this news about ron not being her dad .... i hope thing work out... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love read more ... later for now

angel
person strangerdanger89
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad I reviewed then cause this story has me on my toes it is really good
I wonder how adrinna is going to react when she finds out that her head of house is her father...
man I would flip...

kay well i'll check back later
Strangerdanger89