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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person Chavela
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23

Nice chapter! Very hot!
person Magali
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice! update again!
person Magzie
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was... AMAZING!
haha, I like it how you ended with "HEY MOM!" thats brilliant, at least he never walked in while Draco was pounding her into the mattress, He would have been mortified.. I remember when my causin caught his paretsn doing it, he told me all about it, alls I could do was laugh at him. Anyways please update soon!!

Magzie
person BuffyXO
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One quick question: Is she going to end up pregnant again? They are NOT being careful. You know I love your writing and story, so keep it up.
person strangerdanger89
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O god that is horrible!
My little sister walked in on me and my boyfriend once... Reason 1 why I moved out
But god you make me want to rio my hair I want to know what it going to happen...
lol but I can cope... plus I love the story so I might as well wait make me want it more

well later
strangerdanger89
(my real name is carlie)
person BuffyXO
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, very great job! I am sorry that someone flamed you -- they are just sore that they do not have your talent for writing and cannot create Draco to their liking as well. I love how your ended this chapter, because the very same thing happend to a coworker of mine and her seven year old son, so I was laughing myself silly. What questions RJ may have now ... but they may just oblivate him. Again, I think she is going to end up pregnant again, but only you know for sure. Keep up the awesome job!
person angel
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh you are right you are evil ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person blondiexoxo
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i love it i really do lol very hott and yummy lol cant wait to read more
person juls
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil... purely evil cliffy my friend. Juls
person allie
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please updat