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I dunno, am I missing something here? Is a story not supposed to be fantastic because you can put yourself in that characters position. You know...you can try and understand how Harry feels without parents even though he is a fictional character and you can try and feel how Hermione feels getting preggers at 17 etc. Thats what adds emotional depth and makes a story so believable. Even though the CHARACTERs DON'T EXIST ( yes I do realise that thanks)their emotions and emotional situations could happen to any of us. I mean not tryin to see some untold depth here( Are you trying to be purposfuly shallow then????)but how can you read a story without identifying with the main characters? And if the emotional situation is just by passed in favor of some smut( which I'm sure many others also do and I don't have a problem with that, everybody gets in the mood for meaningless smut sometimes ;) )how can you build up a proper plot??? You gotta either mix them together properly or else just write meaning less smut. Like I said many just come here for the smut so its not a bad thing but sometimes you need...a bit more....just giving some critical advice seeing as nobody else ever does. If I didn't like ur story at all I wouldn't have bothered with a review because I feel the worst review is no review at all. You can be angry at me if you like, I don't mind...

I don't think I've ever read anything more American-sounding than "He grabbed a beer from his ice box..."
Smirk.... thanks for updating so often. I abhor people who hold chapters for ransom/reviews.

Fuck the ones that have shitty things to say... that is my opinion. LOL! Why don't they go and write thier own and if they do, then they do not have to keep reading something they think is wrong with a story.

I love this story, it just keeps on getting better.

Keep it up! I am psyched for more chapters!!!!

I really like the way this story is coming along. I guess some people are forgetting also that this story is set in the future they are adults and have changed. So cannon really doesn't matter here.

i love the story. i can't wait to see what happens when the girls find out they are sisters. don't worry about what others say. i don't understand how people can be so rude to people who have the guts to write fan fiction. i give you credit because i would never be able to do what you do. good lick. keep up the good work.

Great chapter...loved the mention of Rosmerta. I fine fit for ol' sevie, eh?

Marti, how much do I love that you revealed that Snape was with Rosemerta? So much! Thanks for making my day! I also think it is great that Severus gave Draco some food for thought about his relationship with Hermione, because, seriously, what is he doing with her? One minute he is yelling at her for her "little secret" and the next he is shagging her senseless. Anyhoo, I love your story, love your writing, so please keep updating your awesome work! :) Heather :)

omg sev and rosmerta man .. please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

angel

Hey there,

I absolutely adore your story and I stayed tuned all this time, hurrying to read as fast as I found out you'd updated.

Please keep going and ignore the flames! Maybe those people just don't remember how it feels to be totally in love and out of your mind ;-) - I do, and I don't blame Draco and Hermione for going at it all over the place. In fact, I'm no nympho either, but I've done the same thing (and loved every minute of it) *hehe*

Just one tiny thing, though, be careful - you've mixed up Rianna and Lilah twice so far ;) Once during Rianna's Sorting, the Sorting Hat adresses her as Lilah, and once more in chapter 25, where Draco bids Rianna a good night and calls her "Miss Malfoy". You might want to check on that. I know it's hard not to confuse those two girls, since they are both important characters and as far as I understand it, they look very much like sisters, but it might get confusing in the end ;)

Update again soon, and remember that I just absolutely love your writing!

Luthi