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for Hermione's Little Secret

by Marti

person Eyes
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it so much!
a couple of days before the next one what are you trying to do kill me here? :P
person Avanell
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely lovely...a couple more mistakes? I got confused....oh, well...can't wait for the big meeting! Does Hermione get the note in time? Yikes! I really really hope you find a way for Lilah to be embraced by the Weasley's...she's going to need others to give her warmth and comfort...and a happy place :)
person BuffyXO
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating and continuing to write even when your life is so chaotic. I hope everything works out well with your son and that his appointment is positive for you and your family. I like the newest chapter and the decision to keep Narcissa in cannon. I can just see her criticizing to show how much she loves her granddaughter. It is interesting that she remarked more about Adrianna being raised by the Weaseleys than born a half-blood. As you are nearing the end of this story -- are you thinking of a sequel? I think that to have a true happy ending Lilah will need to come around more, but that only is if it is in your plans. Again, thanks for updating when you can and giving us an update was very, very kind. Take care and keep up the fantastic work.
person juls
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it... but hmmmmm more when you get a chance. Looking forwards to the next meeting. ~~juls
person Magali
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and the last chapter was so good!! I'm glad Hermione's daughter is taking the news well, but Draco's doesn't seem to be happy, I hope you'll help her. Update soon!
person none
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update with a new chapter. Or do not show an update where there is none.
This is unfair to the reader.
person lisa
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that was hard on everyone except Rj so oblivious lol like Ron. Poor Lilah she has so much going on like Adrianna but maybe a bit worse. Everyone loves Adrianna and she lost one father only to gain another. but Poor Lilah, her mother doesnt want her, she had to move and leave everything she had known, ontop she finds she has a step sister and is probably scared of losing her father now. So much for lil shoulders to carry. I am hoping things get better. It almost seems a near tragedy will have to happen to bring them all close. Cant wait for more. More more more please. Please update soon.
person strangerdanger89
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute
I loved it!!
It went a little diffetantly that I have expected with lilah blowing up and no adrinna
well ok I'll check back later for a new one .

always
stragnerdanger89
person Elbe
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why this story caught my eye but you sucked me right into it! It's really enjoyable and I can not wait until you update. I love writing stories, especially Fan Fiction. Email me if you want to chat, I love chatting too. You can check out my stories, only two but my beta and my life are quite busy at the moment that is why there are only 5 chapters up(prologue in it).

Elbe.
person sexkitten89
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool cts please this is great.