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for This Is The Way The World Ends.

by tulipsaside

person xenija
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say...This is absolutely GORGEOUSE story! I just love it! The way you describing Severus, harry's dissapointment.....I love it! I can say to you honestly, it's the best Time Travel story featuring hermione and Severus I've read so far.
Bowing my head in front of the author....10/10!
person dacian_goddess
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I think this is just about the best Time Turner story I've ever come across! It's full of compelling action, and it's astoundingly mature in exposing the emotional facets of the principal characters. I'm in awe of the incredibly realistic approach to "exposing" the Marauders, as well as the bigotry and bias of basically all of adult Hogwarts in disfavour of the Slythies. The writing itself is very good, which makes the story all the more addictive; and I think you're doing a brilliant job at exploring the lesser, glossed-over aspects of Hogwarts in this fic, mainly bullying, gratuitous cruelty and discrimination. I'm hooked...I can't wait to see how this progresses!
person Ava Allen
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another chapter !!!
I think that Snape join Dark Lord, bacause of Hermione, she left him without a word in the past. And then, after years, he saw her when she was 11 years old... it must be a shock !
Please, write more :-)

ps. I`m sorry for my english , this is not my language.
person lisa
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this one. Awesome chappies. Poor Severus. You can feel all the emotions are so raw. and Ugg I hope Severus gets them good soon. they deserve it but at least Harry and Hermione are talking again adn Harry gets to see why Severus was the way he was and how his father was a git in his youth. I cant wait for the next few chappies I was so happy to see there was more this morning. More more more please Update soon please.
person Megan
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Give me more, or i will hunt you down and torture you until you produce more!
person lisa
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow at first I was not sure I liked it but the more I read the more I liked. Awesome story. It's unique in its own way. and Omg James attacked Hermione. Thank god Severus was close enough to stop them. I worry for Hermione now. Now that she's alienated Harry they may try again and may succeed if they divide and conquer. and I cannot wait to see what happens next. I really love the story please more more more. Update really soon please. I wonder if they return will Ron be there or is he dead and gone never to return?
person xenija
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is just....incredible. I do hope you'll continue soon.Grat plot, great writing and characters are well written too. ...please continue :-)
person Ava Allen
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good story !
person marti
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely one of the better fanfics here on AFF. I love how Severus and Hermione keep dancing around each other, and Severus' own lack of self-esteem just explains so much. You put a whole new spin on the 'pranks' Sirius and James played on Severus, and later Hermione, showing them to be the true bullies and that there is no true 'good' or 'bad', but that everyone has a bit of each in them, some more than others. their actions are pure malice, while Severus' are mostly self preservation. Very very very well done and i can't wait forthe next update

Marti
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay tulipsaside where's the rest? I really like this story. And you have reminded me of the reason that I hate Potter and Black so vehemently. Please, though, do they get back to their original time? And what if they do? Is Severus still alive? I want to know please!