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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good start! I was wondering where the Mirror of Erised fit into the story. You did a very good job with the fantasy sequence and the transition. Please continue!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now
angel
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You got me on that one. Weird but quite interesting. and is it true in the round about way it mentions Lupin with Harry? wow. didnt see that coming. anyways nice start. update soon please.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, quite creepy and I am glad it was just an image, a subconcience tough of Hermione, quite well developed.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, man. That was great. And I was wondering if i could borrow your needles at some point, obviously giving you credit, but if you say no im good with coming up with more torture on my own...lol. but yeah, like i said. great, even if you keep it as a oneshot.