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for What's a Mom to do?

by Ariande

person Sophia
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! I like how you showed bits from each person's view. Keep up the great work; I can't wait to read more!!
person amyordinary
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved this latest chapter! You've portrayed the children so well! I can't wait for more!
person Woof.
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really great! I like the way Severus just seems to be observing everything. I'm very interested, but at the same time, I can't help thinking 'aww!'
person lenagirl
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Thankyou for the update!!!
person Schan
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE!!!!!!! PLEASE
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now here's an origional story. I wasn't sure based on the description, but since its you i figured it would be good and I was right! so, continue, update!
person lenagirl
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love little harry and snape!!! And I love this story!!!
person paige
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is really good so far. Even better than Mind Meld, which I also really like. Although, the story seems to be moving somewhat slowly. It might not seem so if you updated more....? :)

Anyways, loving all your fics, and looking forward to the next chapter.

ps - If there's no R or NC17 rating, there's a huge ss/hp fanbase on fanfiction.net
person Juno
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post more soon. Lovely story!
person DBZVelena
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story in which i see Nevile being presented right.
Very good writing on your part!
Keep up the good work.