rate_review Reviews

I liked chapter 2. You covered alot of ground and I didn't feel rushed. Your right that her mind works fast and her thoughts would move fast.Keep up the good work.

i dont really a review-reader..but i can say that i enjoy it so far...i dont really like loong descriptions of the dresses whichever girl wears but you writers love"preparing process" for the dates, clubs, balls etc.. anyway off the topic..i just want to say or encourage you to write.. write fast:P...

see you next chapter..

Interesting. it could use more details deinitely and a bit more organized but otherwise good for the first time. We all have to start somewhere and as long as you enjoy writing don't worry so much over the little things. I am sure if you go over it and add more details and organize your thoughts then it will get better as you go. Goodluck.

okay wow, am seriously surprised. I kinda knew u could write but this is amazing man. Keep writing and i'l try to keep up with the reading. I love it, seriously awesome and i love the desrciptions u used.

Keep it up!
xxx

It doesn't suck at all. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this. And her aggravating friends deserve to be left without notice!!! ;D I actually DO like that she left. She could have looked very pathetic and desperate by wanting to stay and getting drunk and trolling for Draco. I like that you gave her some dignity along with her awkwardness.