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I hope you get a chance to update soon. :)

Don't be silly - you keep putting your writing down and I'm really enjoying it! I can't wait for more from you. :)

Yeah, I'm totally with firewall's comment - you're just going with the "less is more" idea when it comes to the sex descriptions. Nothing wrong with that at all.

I don't know what it is exactly about your Hermione, but I empathize with her. She feels very real and very Hermione-ish, which is certainly not always the case. Really liking it!

Actually I've read much worse starts. Hell I've posted worse chapters LOL!!! Keep going!

Hey,
I loved it! Love your style of writing, the idea, it's so cool! Please keep it up, I really want to read more!
Luthi

just when i thought no one saw me when i was dating, you must have had a tiny "bug" on me. ah well, now the truth is out there. great start. please tell me she gets further (and more graceful) than the rest of us clods.

Please don't get discouraged. I really like your story so far and I can't wait to read more of it. I can't wait to read Harry and Ron's reaction to Hermione being with Draco (past and . . . present? *eyes shining hopefully*)

ok i have a huge smile noww..(ok not now...while reading "the blushing part:)" my first being mentioned in an author's note...thanks

definetely better chapter.. but dont you dare get spoiled. i wont write one for each chapter.. i have real problems with my english or my confidence in expressing myself in english...see:))

i still see you next chapter!!!

(for the mention in next chapters i'd like to snog draco a bit...hahahaaa)

Hey again!
Loved it! LOL, you really had me screaming with laughter at Ginny's monologue. Have you ever read something and felt sure this is exactly like something that once happened to you? My grandma does the same thing *rotfl* Is it your intention to portray Ginny as a miniature Mrs. Weasley? If so, you're doing a great job at that!
I also love the way you're ploughing through Hermione's memories. When you're really confused, or something has been stirred up that you think was long forgotten, it's like your mind is on fast-forward. That is at least how I understand it.
I can't wait for more! Do Harry and Ron know about Hermione and Draco shagging? It sounded like the Golden Trio split up completely in the course of the War... Will you clear this up? I'd also be happy if you e-mailed me, no need to put an extra-long A/N on the next chapter just to help me out of my confusion ;)
By the way, your sex scene didn't suck at all! It's a hell more difficult to write smut than one thinks unless one has tried himself ;) so please, keep it up, keep going!
Hope this helped with your addiction ;)
Cheers, Luthi

Ch 1 - First off, never, NEVER apologize for your writing. (It's taken me a while and I still cringe when I read grammatically incorrect stories but I no longer complain, just sigh.) I really enjoyed your first chapter. It was well-written, humerous and catchy. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.