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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chappies keep getting better and better. I like the back story and am anxious to know what will happen..more please!! Hurry..great job!!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww quite a sweet sentimental chapter here, that I enjoyed ^_^ I liked looking back on the breif overview on Hermione and Dracos relationship :) Can't wait to see where this continues to go, so please update soon!
Love Natalie
Love Natalie
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. :) Keep it up
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I feel so bad for the both of them.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!!!! *Standing Ovation* That's so awesome that you posted a story, and a GOOD story at that!
I just read Chapter 1 and LOVE it! It's got intrigue, flirting and tension... ohhh I'm in for more!
Thank you for posting it!
I just read Chapter 1 and LOVE it! It's got intrigue, flirting and tension... ohhh I'm in for more!
Thank you for posting it!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok just finished the it all... and WOW! I mean... WOW! HOLY CRAP!
That last chapter ROCKS!
Girl you're awesome! Please keep writing! I love it!
That last chapter ROCKS!
Girl you're awesome! Please keep writing! I love it!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far 3 chapters accomplished these:
regularly checks for updates (by me)...
the story proves its orginality...(as many would agree)
also how to tell?? when story captives you and you read on a breath.. it is what i mean..
So proud of you..ok not need for sentimentals
regularly checks for updates (by me)...
the story proves its orginality...(as many would agree)
also how to tell?? when story captives you and you read on a breath.. it is what i mean..
So proud of you..ok not need for sentimentals
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing so far. I can't wait to read more, please please post again soon!
Jammar
Jammar
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - I wouldn't say you are bad with sex scenes but rather you gloss over the sex scenes. Now you could use the excuse that you are allowing us to imagine the lemons or you just stay silent and enigmatic about them. LOL Don't feel you have to apologize. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heck, I'm going to apologize...I just noticed I spelt humourous incorrectly up above.