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LOved the update!

Awwwww!!!!! Severus is so sweet and lol I 'd love to be Hermione for a while lol. Woot woot they are togther finally. and Ohh dear Harry suspects something. Poor Hermione, I feel a bad fight coming . but on a happier note yay Ron is making his way on the road to recovery. thanks to Severus adn Hermione. Cant wait to see what happens next. Is Ron really cured? or just contained for the moment? Will there be dancing again? and Will Harry find out what happens in detention? lol cant wait to find out. more more more please. Please update soon.

RE: Your comment on other reviews. Pay them no mind. Yes it was somewhat graphic - but , um surprise, this is an adult site and as far as graphic imagery goes, this chapter 9 of yours was not the most graphic nor uncomfortable in any way to regular readers of erotica of the NC17 rating. You did a lovely job with the chapter, with the characters and with the sex. Do not let anyone tell you any different!

Opinions are like assholes, everybody has one.

I do know how you feel though, no matter how many great reviews you get that one bad one just hits the wrong way. Just want to throw up your hands and say screw it, I ain't writing any more of this story. Been there, done that...then I go back and read all the GOOD REVIEWS and eventually it takes the sting out of the bad one(s).

Now, that said here's a bit of what probably will be an ego boost for you. The first time you left a review on my story(ies) I was thrilled to no end, you are one of my FAV Fanfic authors. I LOVED The Beauty Found Within The Beast, it's one of my fav LM/HG stories. I've been following the other LM/HG you have on here and Dare To Dance as well. Those reviews you left encouraged me to keep writing even though another writer, who I use to admire, said somethings that initially left me feeling as though I'd never be considered a good writer. Anyhow, I really do hope you will continue this story so many of your readers, including myself, would be so disappointed.

Your Fanfiction is great and I would like to say that being graphic with lemons is the piont of the web site, others may be affened but they had fair warning before they got to your fanfiction, plus each person's first veries.

as this is an adult site, maybe one should expect the plot to get a bit detailed when it comes to the passages FOR ADULTS! If someone can't cope with it, then you should just scip the parts or simply stay away from this site in your best interest. Critic on plot, style of writing, slopiness etc. are normal and often welcome. But LEMONS??? I'm very very sure, I've read much steamier ones.

Um..., I don't see how it is any more graphic than some other fics I have seen on this site, nor do I think that your fic would require a lesser degree of smut (lol-sorry, that sounds a little prudish while we are talking about lemons). I myself have written smut that is either just as graphic or even more so. I happen to enjoy your story very much and hope that you continue what you feel is good for the fic-if the smut brings you readers, doesn't take away from the story itself, and/or fits the action in the rest of the story, I say make it as graphic as you want. But that's me. I like it!

Okay! Now, we're in business! I am so sorry that I didn't check that last night when I uploaded it. I never meant to put up a post to the story that ended up looking like a complaint to the readers! Forgive my mistake!!! I will have more lemony goodness posted again in ch 11, I promise!

Thanks for letting me know (No telling how long I would have been adding chapters without putting in the important stuff!)

SD

wonderful chapter.
waiting for more.

Great chapter. Thanks for fixing it so quickly!