rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to say that chapter was so hot. You did a great job.

This was a lovely lemony drop. I really like this story! Can't wait to read more!

Wonderful chapter. Thanks for taking time from the busy holiday stuff for posting. I've been checking all of your open stories and finally got one updated! Ha!

I'm wondering about Ron now, is he truly fine?

Loved the last bit of the chapter though. I felt bad for Severus not feeling confident enough to be able to tell her he loves her too.

Eagerly awaiting more.

Have a great holiday!

love the story. can't wait to see what you do with ron. please update soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I was in two minds whether to write this review, partly because I don't want to be got at for what is merely my opinion.

I was a bit disappointed with chapter 9 and I agree with the person who described them as sour.

Up until chapter 9 the tension was building beautifully between your characters and I was looking forward to the consummation of their relationship. I certainly didn't think the love scene was too graphic at all, if anything I thought it was cheesy and full of porno cliche. It made me laugh and completely broke the tension you had built so well to that point.

That's just an opinion though, and plenty of people disagree. You can't please everybody all the time and I'm enjoying the rest of the story.

"and answering his touches with explorations of his own"
Sorry, but shouldn't this be:
"and answering his touches with explorations of HER own" ?

I hope you don't mind me being so picky *giggle*

For the rest of it...whew...things are getting rather spicy...you keep me glued to my seat...
Alexandra

"and to you ove him, Miss Granger?", shoulf be "And DO you love him, Miss Granger?"
Wit a sweep of his robes... - wit being with

I found some spelling errors, but my computer acted up, so I wasn't able to write them to you.
As to your command about certain people having trouble with chapter 9.
Please promiss you will never compromise your writing due to the fact some people don't like what you wrote.
It is your story to tell, never forget that.
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Only one thing remains to be said...I get the feeling this story isn't quite done yet.
To many loose ends.
I hope you will continue, and erm...I do very much enjoy the lemons.
They make one hell of a lemonade *evil grin*

Wow, I can not believe the turn of events for the last two chapters. I was very surprused. I never would have thought about something like that happening. I wanna be mad at Ron, cause I dont' like him, but it is not his fault, bummer, LOL!

Very good!