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Darn, no baby. Also good cuz they really wouldn't be ready for one. Excellent. story.

Such a good story. Thanks so much for writing it. I also think that Ron should get his own story. In the last few chapters he changed and grew up. I would look forward to reading such a story from you. But also again thanks for this story.

Hate to see it end.

this story was amazing!!

is there going to be a sequel?

Above and beyond all else, thank you for finishing the story. It is a sad waste when gifted writers just let their creations sit and their readers left hanging.

i really like all of your work, and dare to dance is a fairly unique take on a severus/hermione fic. All of your work is very original and inspiring. I'd love to ask you a few questions about your writing. Perhaps you could e-mail me?


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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This story is excellent. The dance scenes incorporated added such ambiance to the tale. It was nice to read a story where Snape takes Hermione's virginity with finesse rather than sheer brute force of his penis, although as a nurse i did have to laugh at his 11 inches. My My what kind of blood pressure does this man have, still the nod to humour was good. A lot of people are worried about an impending pregnacy, only you can say whether she concieves this time or not. I too would love to see another chapter following the plot

Thank you for sharing your work, keep writing

hey thank you very much for the update...I was worry that you wont come back!
I love this story and hope after you finish it, you going to write a sequel.....
wonder if severus and hemione will having a baby soon.....

(sorry, if my writing is so bad, but english is not my native language)

Chapter 13: Hermione has visions of university, but she's playing Russian roulette with her biological clock? Those two would be conscientious loving parents, but I agree with Severus that just now, it's more important for Hermione to continue her studies. If she were Pansy Parkinson, I'd say her best bet was marriage and kids. But Hermione has a brain, although it seems to be wallowing in her knickers at the moment.

I know it would be difficult not to want to settle in under those black buttoned up robes of Snape's, but she can do that without courting a baby just yet. He's wiser than she is. They have time for pablum and diapers later. They should enjoy each other for a while longer.

Babies in stories are popular, but let them have a romantic sex life for two for now. They can have a sequel with a brood of baby Snapes, with Daddy being all sexy and protective as he's challenged by the new role of fatherhood, reacting to his growing family. I think that would make a fun story.

I'm glad we have a new chapter - I've been checking to see if one has appeared and now I've gotten lucky. Thanks!!