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for Dare to Dance

by ShilohDarke

person Cara
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh just saw your H.R Giger icon.
Love it, I'm a fan of his art too.

Just found out what UST means...and !!!! it better be resolved. >_>

pwease?
person Lyssa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE NOW!!!

WANT MORE DANCE SCENES!!!!!!
person m. majere
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an original story and you've done a great job. There is also a lot of suspense here in this last chapter. I enjoyed it and am looking forward to seeing what happens.
person Anguloce
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ack poor hermione...really buggered that one, didn't she? can't wait for more!
person Jade
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please for the love of all things Harry Potter, write Fast!!!! I'm hooked and I need more chapters! Love the plot line so far.
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update! Update!
person Moyra
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Already an update - wonderful!
Ron's quite overdone here with his spiteful remarks. To tell Hermione not to sit with them at breakfast is very low and is NOT something you would expect from a friend.
Will Snape follow DD's allowance to pursue her? Yes, I guess as much, after all he had asked her to consider him as a proper dancing partner and kissed her palm (with audience, to boot).
Draco's rather forward; used to show off himself in all kinds, mm, liked it. I also loved your other caras, Lavender, Ginny and Harry.
Looking forward to more
person LaBibliographe
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco naked? Hmmm...okay, I'd still rather have his dad. But Severus has definite possibilities. I'm sure, as you've introduced it, you're going to gives us a lemony flashback to the romance between Albus and Minerva - NOT!!

I'm glad this is progressing at a believable pace. I don't mind waiting through the UST for the good stuff if the characters come together naturally. 'Ron' and 'git' are both three-letter words and they have a lot in common.

Update soonest please. I don't know how you can write several stories at once. I'm in awe.

Oh, I think having "ONE-SHOT" in your intro attracts the eye and maked readers think it is a one-shot, and they don't read any further. It confused me a bit.
person Jade
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Please update fast, I can't wait to see what you do next!
person Liz
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I love this idea... ha, Draco made her an offer!