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for Dare to Dance

by ShilohDarke

person Anon
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, for a smart girl Hermione sure did an incredibly stupid thing, every word out of her mouth just made it worse... the girl better start using her impressive brain and fix it before the sexy Snape gets away! I love this story, so sweet, sexy, and very believable too! Hope you won't keep me waiting too long for your next chapter.
person Jade
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! An update :) :) :) You rock! Please keep updating quickly!
person Kris
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...more... NOW!
person lisa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh dear Ron is still being a prat. go figure. and Omg he wrote her. that was sweet. but omg Hermione was sooo dumb to confess. what was she thinking? Lol but at least that is out the way now. and Hey she has definitely sealed her fate by making Severus want to pursue her even more now. and it helps she has her own want of him. Lol I have a feeling detention should be fun!!!! Lots of Lemons I smell. I hope. lol More more more Please.Please update soon.
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!
person Pam
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
person Barbara
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!
person firewall
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - Poor Severus! The witch definitely did not get any points for diplomacy...open mouth insert foot. Can't wait for the detention.
person Cara
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WIPs should be illegal. I don't think I can wait to see what happens next!
Yaay for... whoever it was that let you go on with your plot bunny.
Three chaps and I'm already hooked. What a sexy dancing scene. I never thought Snape would know how to tango, or Hermione for that matter. o.o hmm.
Only thing is you didn't include what Snape thought of Hermione before he danced with her. That POV would have been interesting and key to the story. But you've really got something great here. Let's see this bunny grow into a big rabbit!
omg i think i've just humiliated myself by attempting cheesy humour.
K BYE
-Cara
person ladyofthemasque
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...just to remind you, Albus said she would be graduating in two *weeks*, and he just gave her detention for the next two *months*...though I cannot blame him for being so angry over her words. For jumping to conclusions and misunderstanding her meaning, for not allowing her to explain herself, yes; but not for what he thought she was saying, which is understandable enough in that context. ~Lotm