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for Dare to Dance

by ShilohDarke

person Bravmiki
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so glad she came clean with him now. It is much better for him to know now rather than later. She still has a chance to charm him. Moreoever...her desires for Snape have not yet awakened.

As always - wonderful! Looking for you next update of one your many pots on the stove ::))
person Ladytalon
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She's really put her foot into it this time! For her detention, however...hmm. *rubs hands together* I think it should be something messy and foul, perhaps acidic, that she somehow gets on Sev's robes so that he has to take them off right away so that he won't get burned by it. *snickers* Yeah, something like that.
person lisa
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps Sev wil make Hermione clean cauldrons or the floors or perhpas a trip to the forbidden forest to gather ingredients. oir perhaps it'll all be a ploy and he'll just grab her and take her to bed!! I am not really sure what he will do. Sev is quite unpredictable at times. He can be cruel. he's definitely dark. and his temper is short. Whatever it is I am sure you will make it good. and I cannot wait. more more more please. Please update soon. I looked and thought you updated lol but ahh well. left another message hoping to feed the muse. Awaiting patiently.
person sansa
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't wait to read more. Please don't make us avid readers wait too long for an update.
person Moyra
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You made my Saturday with your update
person a_reader
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, what a blunder. It made *me* hurt.
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, what going to happen next?
person Annie
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh please please update soon! i love this.
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh, I odn't know.

Something hot I should imagine!
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh! Can't wait to see what happens...love the premise.....update soon!