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for Dare to Dance

by ShilohDarke

person Bravmiki
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow - never saw that coming. What a naughty Severus (would he like to come out to play - free this evening). Delicious!! More, please!!!
person bluedecor
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your fics coming along. Maybe a bit more of Snape's inner feelings would help you avoid falling into OOC-ness. Not to say that I don't find your characterizations good, because I do :)
Thanks for the fic!
person Tenar10r
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh he's so MEAN!.
person skye
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oops...well, good for Hermione in "coming clean" on the reason she asked, but I think waiting a bit might have helped her though.... as for detention...hmmmmmm, maybe Snape will still "force" the dance partnership trying to prove to himself that they don't "fit" lol.....and we all know how well that will work!
person Cara
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An enchanted quill, what writer wouldn't want one?
Lol.
This chapter was well worth the wait, even thought it was a short one.
200 points is ridiculous and unfair. Snape has anger management problems lol.
I can't believe they kissed! Wow that scene was sizzling. Even though I wouldn't kiss him so soon after he took 200 friggin points away.
And I think everyone can agree with me when I say dancing with Snape is far from punishment? ;)
Just wondering, wouldn't the staff and teachers + Dumbledore be wondering what granted the major point loss?
Man I love this story. Hope we won't have to wait too long for chapter 5.
person Jade
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor naked Hermione. And in a cold castle as well. Thank you for updating, please update again soon!
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I am loving this story. :)
person sheedy
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL Snape certainly took his dress back! I look forward to your next update.
person Kris
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! XD
person Shdwcat27
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Can't wait to see what happens next.