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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, Chapter 4 was very yummy... I especially liked the little bit at the end. The letter was a nice touch.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: Hmmm... The combined lucid dream was pretty interesting... original anyway. This whole thing seems to be moving a little fast though.
Emotionally I mean... Would Snape really be thinking love this early?
Maybe it's just because my Snape is forever a horny emotionally dead asshole.
Oh well, we'll see where it goes then.
Keep up the good work.
Emotionally I mean... Would Snape really be thinking love this early?
Maybe it's just because my Snape is forever a horny emotionally dead asshole.
Oh well, we'll see where it goes then.
Keep up the good work.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes yes... Ron's a jerk, Draco goes nice, Snape is sexy
I think we've got the makings of a right good story here boss!
But I think you mean "I had detention, Malfoy" rather than "I had detection, Malfoy"
Ha.. detection... we all know very well what she was detecting!
(Snape's massive erection!)
Oooh boy, I'm mature.
;)
I think we've got the makings of a right good story here boss!
But I think you mean "I had detention, Malfoy" rather than "I had detection, Malfoy"
Ha.. detection... we all know very well what she was detecting!
(Snape's massive erection!)
Oooh boy, I'm mature.
;)
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just a guess but Ron is starting toi act like Draco and the other way round have they switched in some way.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that Dramione scene had my heart pulsing, you could have made Hermione feel a little something for him, *sulks* poor Draco, he always seems to get the shortstraw... Oh to be Hermione then... *sigh*!
As for Ron...
Bloody git! It's his fault!!!
Snape was cool... MORE!
As for Ron...
Bloody git! It's his fault!!!
Snape was cool... MORE!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've never liked Ron, canon or otherwise, but he's definitely been slipped a mickey to act that bad. Thanks for the update!!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent story. Just keep them coming faster.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Keep going!
Was it by any chance inspired by a song called "Refuse to Dance" with Alan Rickman speaking in his most seductive way?
Was it by any chance inspired by a song called "Refuse to Dance" with Alan Rickman speaking in his most seductive way?
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Awwwwwww! How cuuuuute!!!! U better continue this!!! I can't wqait to see what happens! Wow! I was hyper before this but now my hyper-ness encreased ten-fold!!! I kept squealing so much that my neighbours from below me ( I live in an apartment) started to shout at me from their balcony! It was hilarious! Oh wow! Thanks to u and ur story and my hyper-ness I've been inspired to write another chap for my own SS/HG fic. Thanks!!! Don't worry it'll be differnt then this, but it sure as hell gave me a very evil idea!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please write more!! This story is brilliant, very well written! can't wait to read more!