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Great chapter.

Wow They seem to be torturing each other when if they'd only speak. And Omg Ron!!!! He is possessed and Poor Hermione. Thank God Draco heard heard her and went to grab Severus. And perhaps there is more to Harry and Drco huh? lol Cant wait for more. more more more please. I cant wait to find out what Ron did to her. Poor Hermione hope its not too bad. Please update soon.

No complaints from me. I'm glad Draco was able to get to Severus and I'm glad Hermione seemed to have been able to defend herself.

Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to more.

Of course we don't mind transitional chapters! Having a plot to the story is a good thing. And you spin and excellent tale.

~Catstaff

O.o More... plz?

grrr I hate Ronald Weasley even in canon I can't stand him! Poor Draco panicky hehe will he be paired with Harry? :D

Hmm... Good chapter for introducing us to the Ron concept, which is, by the way, pretty original I think (I've never read that idea at least). Other than that though, it felt pretty rushed, and I thought the ending was really abrupt. It just didn't have the "end of the chapter" feeling to it. Futhermore, I was really surprised when Snape broke away from her and we didn't get any explaination from him. Since you've decided to do an internal dialogue for both of them, I would have expected some sort of explaination there... especially after the whole "later, but not now" thing.
Anyway, I hope you don't take my critism the wrong way - it's kindly meant.

Great chapter! Hmm, I like the twist with Ron. :)

This is so hot and well written.... keep writing, i'm hooked! The though of Severus dancing is just so hot.

Excellent writing- good story and I love the buildup between them. Hot. :) LK