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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maybe its just me but i don't think your chapter uploaded correctly. BTW, they didn't like detailed lemons? They are soooo on the wrong site if they don't like lemons. Love your lemons, please make more!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I personally say write how you want to write it's your story if people don't like it they can find something else to read. I, myself, have greatly enjoyed your story and it is one of my saved pages so that I can check easily to see when you have undated. Go with what your doing it is coming out very nicelyand I look forward to more.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the lemons... the story is still brilliant. As a matter of fact, considering this is ADULT fan fiction, it was rather tame, as far as graphicness is concerned. I thought it was just naughty enough. Bravo. Please don't tone down your lemons.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 10 was cut off unless it was just an a/n
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well i didn't expect that the lemons were going to be that sour...lol...yeah i was expecting something not so detail and sweeter, considering their relatioship and the pace, but great job non-theless. Loved the chapter, but i kind of skipped the *lemons* it kind of bothers me...lol.....but love the story great job. NOw write more!!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!! i love the story, continue!!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey,
just came here to say, great story!
i'm really curious if ron will get better.
Will it be a 'they live happily ever after' story or will it have a bit of sad ending..?
waiting for your next update,
Amanda
just came here to say, great story!
i'm really curious if ron will get better.
Will it be a 'they live happily ever after' story or will it have a bit of sad ending..?
waiting for your next update,
Amanda
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I like this. What will happen with Ron? Love the build up to HG/SS finaly getting it on. Pls hurry with ch 10.
ccino
ccino
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a great story! very hot and great writing.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy Thanksgiving to you as well.
Great chapter. Thanks for taking time out of your holiday to post it for us. I'm looking forward to seeing how Ron will react to the potion.
Great chapter. Thanks for taking time out of your holiday to post it for us. I'm looking forward to seeing how Ron will react to the potion.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It rocked. Great story if I haven't reviewed here yet. hugz juls