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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The lemons too graphic? I thought they were great; just right for a first time!
I think this is a wonderful story and it would be a shame if you wrote it differently because of one or two complaints. Intense lemons are te best lemons imho.
Great story!
I think this is a wonderful story and it would be a shame if you wrote it differently because of one or two complaints. Intense lemons are te best lemons imho.
Great story!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Those last two chapters were hot! Emotional and funny.
I think that is a great story, and yay! Pansy's with Draco in this one! I like that couple a little bit.
Now its my turn to say this...
MORE PLEASE!
I think that is a great story, and yay! Pansy's with Draco in this one! I like that couple a little bit.
Now its my turn to say this...
MORE PLEASE!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, so happy to see frequent updates. With regards to the lemons in chapter 9, I liked it!!! First f all, this is the adult-fanfiction, so juicy lemons must be accepted (and for many of us, wanted). Seccond, I find that when a story is well written, making the readers know about the caracters feelings and thougths in details and then suddenly, when it comes to what must be said to be a major step in their relationship, it is passed with two sentences and then they wake up next morning, something is very much missed.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After reading your A/N, I had to go back and reread Ch 9. Did not find the referred to offending scene to be any more or less than other authors have written here at 'ADULT'fanfiction.'
Looking forward to Ron facing HG and of course Harry's thoughts about the detentions. And naturally, any more 'dancing' sessions;)
Looking forward to Ron facing HG and of course Harry's thoughts about the detentions. And naturally, any more 'dancing' sessions;)
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way you are formating this story. It's just perfect. Thank you.
And even though I swore I wouldn't do it. Please.............. update soon.
Best wishes,
And even though I swore I wouldn't do it. Please.............. update soon.
Best wishes,
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shiloh honey, don't let someone's dislikes bother you. Always remember that you are writing to please yourself, not the scores that read the stuff. It's about time someone wrote some good smut, and I found the last two chapters to be very well written and not offensive at all.
If someone doesn't want to read the stuff, they need to quit looking at R/NC-17 rated fics and stick with the cute stuff over at fanfiction.net.
My love of uncensored nc-17 is why I now have my own site.
So, rock on, girl. Let er rip.
If someone doesn't want to read the stuff, they need to quit looking at R/NC-17 rated fics and stick with the cute stuff over at fanfiction.net.
My love of uncensored nc-17 is why I now have my own site.
So, rock on, girl. Let er rip.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't know what those other people were talking about...those lemons were HOT HOT HOTTT!! i loved it...and i can't wait till you write the next set. as for this last chapter...is it just me or is the chapter suppose to be that short and it's suppose to end saying "This was her first,". just a little confused there. awesome job!! i'm loving it!! <3 AFC
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ignore the complaints!!! This site isn't called "Adult fan fiction" for nothing. More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought the lemon was HOT! I wouldn't change a thing and if people don't like it they don't have to read that chapter. Honestly the name of the site is Adutl Fanfiction and if they can't handle graphic material they shouldn't be on this site.
Sorry for ranting,
Have a nice evening,
'Nes
Sorry for ranting,
Have a nice evening,
'Nes
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a nice chapter and very appropriate. Have these people read some of the other fics in here? They can get rather dark.