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for Dark Lady

by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved saving miss granger and i love this plot so i think it would be cool to see granger with other men
person Bella Snape
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! What a weird but wonderful way to unite the wizarding world.
person nessie
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
go for it. I look forward to reading it.
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that was definatly Excellent! I hope you turn this into more than a one-shot. It was fantastic!
person cat
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know, not that I wouldn't want to see Hermione with other men, it's just that senario is too outlandish to ever be really believable. My perceptions of Hermione as a character have been developed mainlyl from reading all your stories so this drastic change seems too strange
person lisa
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Funny. just omg awesome. Yay for Hermione. She's giving them hel and they deserve it. Bound to the one thing they were against. Appropriate punishment. I would love to see more.If you get tiem. I loved it. I wanna see Draco get his lol. and Hermione is sweet on Severus. and hmmm she hasn't done anything to Lucius or Rodolphus. and Dolohov deserves a bit of a payback for her fifth year. OHHH I hope you will make this more than a one shot. Perhaps a few lemons and to see who she ends up with, if she claims one for herslef and I would love to see what Happens to all those sexy Slytherin Men. so Please consider Making it a bit longer. You are so talented and have a way with words and I love all the lemons you write. You are detailed and quite thourough and I do so enjoy reading your stories. You are one of my favorite authors. Kudos.
person NVSCat
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Please keep going. I love it so far.
person lisa
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories. i love Severus with Hermione. however I don't mind at all if you pair her with others as well. I think a variety is nice and lol if she can do it why not? When will an oppourtunity like that ever arise again. I say use that power like a Slytherin and show them how much a Gryfynndor can Learn their game and do it just as well as they can. I hope you get more approvals. I would really love to see this carry on. I love Draco and Lucius and Roldolphus. Sexy Slytherin Men. She just has to take it. it's too good to pass up. and ohhh what nice smutty lemons there will be. hehehehe. Can't wait. either way you have my loyalty. and my absolute faith.
person dacian_goddess
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Nooooooo....PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE don't leave the story off there!

This is one of the most intriguing, brilliant concepts for a story I've ever come across - it just BEGS to be developed into a full, action-packed, orchard-visiting extravaganza! That little one-shot teaser just raised far too many questions that need addressing; and yeah, it would be something to let your readers decide for themselves where things would go. But it would be a lot more exhillarating and entertaining to expound on what you had in mind in terms of Hermione's revolutionary rule -- not to mention I'd love to see a subservient Draco taken down a couple pegs. Albus' reaction might also be interesting, not to mention what Hermione was up to those five years she'd spent preparing for this coup. And let's not forget our favourite Potions Master. Please develop this into a full story!
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?