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for Dark Lady

by Ms_Figg

person michelline
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go for it! I think Hermione would like having multiple partners :) I'll always read your stories! I love 'em and have been reading them on the burning pen for a while now. Glad to see you adding to them.
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOH YES PLEASE!!! I am possibly a HYUGE SS/HG shipper but I have a soft spot for Hermione/Lucius, and Hermione/Draco... so yep... it sounds good to me...
person MND
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... I don't think i'd like a story with Hermione with multiple couples, but I DON'T realley know, cause I haven't read any yet. But i liked your chapter, so GIVE IT A TRY
person Kristen
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think anything you write is great.So go for it.^_^
person v_sev
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
My dear genius in my opinion you can/must write hermione and Severus in all forms and manners, so write her fuc..ing whom ever you want, I bet it will be hot and hard!!! lol
Go for it, it's going to be another masterpiece.
Hugs
v_sev
person HLL
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that your story idea is awesome no matter who Hermione is with. Please continue writing!!!
person shameful lurker
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes please write it.
Alternately there are other multipartner stories that I'd like to see. I fantasized a lot about them but I can't write to save my life so... if you like the ideas please please write them.

1) sex magic (HG/many with HG/SS emphasis)
Post HBP, SS is invited by Lucius Malfoy to the Malfoy Manor dungeons where he detains a special guest. As they are descending the stairs, Lucius collapses, dead. SS continues to the dungeons and finds Draco dead on top of a passed out Hermione. SS immediately recognizes the special ability that Hermione has used to suck up the life energy of her rapist and his blood relatives, the sex magic through which a witch can capture, store, manipulate a man's life energy during intercourse. He decides this is the breakthrough the Order have been hoping for, worth blowing his carefully created cover, and disapparates with HG to the (not-dead) headmaster's secret location. They have to prepare HG for the great rite during which she will have to feed from the lifeforce of the male order members so as to get enough momentum to destroy Voldemort through Harry (shared blood) and Snape (dark mark). Obviously this rite works much better if there is no contraception so that a life can be created, adding to the energy sucking impetus. Optionally, Harry is the child conceived by his mother during a similar rite, in which Snape may or may not have participated, and this is why Lily married Harry's idiot father. (You can see why I am no writer and especially no smut writer, I can't make myself write precise details about sex. Use your imagination. Obviously you have lots of it). I have no further "plot" ideas so I don't know how the story ends.

2) The Hogwarts harem (SS/many with possibly SS/HG) This is Edelweis' challenge on owl.tauri.org:
"Keeping Albus' pet DE busy
Challenge:

The Hogwarts staff members were appalled when they learned that Severus Snape has been hired to teach Potions. Such an ugly and antisocial young man, a suspected Death Eater, how to make sure he would not abuse his position as a teacher to molest the students ? It hardly looked like he was able to get laid without resorting to coercition, while he was barely out of hormonal teen age and was bound to have strong urges, possibly perverted by his dark background.
But of course Severus, even if a repentant DE, is still a Slytherin and able to manipulate the rest of the staff for his own profit...

Required:
a) Must mention staff schedules that include "keep SS busy" hours.
b) At least one member of the staff must keep SS busy and sated through sexual activity (implied or explicit as you wish). Harem or gigolo themes are okay too.
c) If the story is an HG/SS ship (not mandatory but appreciated), Severus' ability to be "interested" in a younger witch after so many years of b) must be questioned.
d) SS would not actually abuse his position as a teacher that way, whether he bothers explaining that or not.

Genre: no(t too much) angst please. Comedy and/or humour and/or romance preferred. Shameless PWP is ok too.

Up to the writer:
rating, canon compliancy, story timeline etc.

Comments welcome..."
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fantasmic! You should definately consider making it a multi-chapter story. So many layers you have already started. Good Plot. So, yeah. If you decide to go further with it, you will have a faithful reader and reviewer in me!
person Pianita
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Mrs Figg,
Please explore this new idea of Hermione's interest in different wizards besides Severus. You may want Severus to be witness or aware of these affairs and build tension for the posibility of a eventual joining of the famous couple.
I believe it will prove to be very fun for the writer and the reading audience. This is a different Hermione and therefore a very differnt take on "bed dymanics" the aggressor could be a female for a change!!! the victim a poor big death eater....how exciting!!!
person SnapesPet30
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go for it Hun! I would love to see how this story develops.