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for Dark Lady

by Ms_Figg

person Lydia
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story. very interesting. i would like to see it go further. Hermione could be very bad with Draco and Lucis but with Severus be very good and often. i hope you continue this.
person sheedy
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go for it!!!! Just let us know if the mods move it to the general catagory please.
person ozarkmoon
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes please! PLEASE! PLEASE, PLEASE!!! Have Hermione be truly demanding of all the men we love - Severus and Lucius especially. If anyone could make it more than acceptable by the - normally - SS/HG fans, you could.
person Jess
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories! You're one of my favorite authors. Please continue this fic!
person Cara
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I personally only like Hermione with Severus and vice versa.
But if you have other shots I'd skip over them.
person shameful lurker
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mrs Figg: too bad. Well, feel free to take elements from one or both ideas in future fics. Anyway I'm looking forward to the Dark Lady story, and the Halloween story updates are eagerly awaited.
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
shameful lurker: wow, my eyes crossed on the sex magic idea...so complicated...but cool. Unfortunately, I don't write well to plotlines because I have to work on getting it to a set point A, point B point C and I just don't think linear like that. I've tried to do it but was unable to...the exception being the Marriage Law story I wrote, but I hadn't even read the challenge properly so :::shrug:::. But they are both exceptional ideas. Maybe someone else will pick them up. Thanks for posting.
person sophie
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love SS/HG but i love LM too! DM is ok, hes not bad but just kinda young but i dont care. please write the story because not all of them have to be strictly SS/HG and this story has a really good beginning
person elementaldeity
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's a wonderful idea. Dark Hermione with various Slytherin men in one story. Reading doesn't get much better than that. I hope you do develop the plot for it. I love all your stuff and am a loyal reader if not reviewer. Sorry for that;)
elementaldeity
person KayJay
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read anything you write. I'm a big fan. I tend to "jump ship" (please forgive the pun) myself, so seeing Hermione with anyone would be fine. I really like what you've done with her character and I would love to have you explore a "darker" Hermione. So I say write on!