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for Dark Lady

by Ms_Figg

person xidaer
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please extend the story! It began so well! I want to see what Hermione will do with her new powers and how she got them! Who is her 'master'? And what wonderful ravishment will she heap upon her subjects? *evil grin*
Thanks so much!
person deathraven
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh oh please make this into a full length story!! i really like it so far keep going!!
person danielle
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i thought it was great i think you should definitly continue and turn it into a full fledged story i was sad when i got to the end :) i dont normally revuew but i thought you deserved it
person greengurl
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you decide to do this as a full length story. My favorites are HG/SS stories, but when you combine that with both Lucius and Draco, it only gets hotter. Not to mention that I'm all for seeing a story where Hermione is the "evil" one and the one with all the power. Sooo I really hope you do this one after you finish Hallowed and Choice! :) yayy
person BananaFlavoredEskimo
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see you continue this story. I like this new twist on Hermione's dark nature. I've never read a fic quite like this one before and i want to see where you go with this.
person alyson
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should make this a short story!
person Karlea
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, make this a full story! Please! I'm already hooked, and you've only written one chapter, lol.
person jem89
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see this as a fully fledged story! I think it would be brilliant if Hermione was with Lucious and Draco as well as Severus. Please update soon : )
person Empress
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's... different. I'd want a full story just to see what the hell happened to make her this way. Don't be too concerned about the audience you'll get for this one. HG/SS/DM/OC is sexy. Slightly slutty, but still sexy.
person Karen
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't be opposed to such sex scenes as you describe, Ruth. Don't do it unless you actually have a storyline you're truly satisfied with though.