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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, ok, I'm likin it so far but damm pretty grusome deaths for the parents, well just update soon with more chapters don't take so long like other authors do
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU NEED A BETA READER. This is so hard to read. Please correct your many mistakes in grammar and spelling. This could be a good story, but not the way it is.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking this is a dream ? It's interesting.. I like the intro to the next chapter.... up date soon
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was an interesting beginning I really liked it ^_^
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting start... psychedelic trip.... can't wait to read more : )