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August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear The Rebellious Observer
Wow.. I must say, you have a way with your writing. The way you depict Draco as the seme (dominant) and Harry as the uke (submissive) is so.. I don't know, erotic! It really is great stuff you are writing here. ^^ I read every single piece of your work, kind of funny that I've read some of it before and I really loved it. I'm really sad now though.. I've read all of your pieces of work and now I'm left to fish around for some more Top!Draco/Bottom!Harry work. =\ Please, if you ever come out with any more pieces of work, put me on your mailing list. Thank you soo much for your great work and creativity.
Your new fan,
Rouisu
Wow.. I must say, you have a way with your writing. The way you depict Draco as the seme (dominant) and Harry as the uke (submissive) is so.. I don't know, erotic! It really is great stuff you are writing here. ^^ I read every single piece of your work, kind of funny that I've read some of it before and I really loved it. I'm really sad now though.. I've read all of your pieces of work and now I'm left to fish around for some more Top!Draco/Bottom!Harry work. =\ Please, if you ever come out with any more pieces of work, put me on your mailing list. Thank you soo much for your great work and creativity.
Your new fan,
Rouisu
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, one more thing. Please.. try creating a story arch. All of these one-shots leave me craving more! T_T
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Huh.
Really, that's all that will describe this. 'Huh'. It makes a great ONE-SHOT, but could also easily be a multi-chaptered story. What ever you decide to do, it was...well, 'Huh'. JK it was great.
Slashy Snitch
Really, that's all that will describe this. 'Huh'. It makes a great ONE-SHOT, but could also easily be a multi-chaptered story. What ever you decide to do, it was...well, 'Huh'. JK it was great.
Slashy Snitch
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is an awesome chapter/story (are you going to continue this? 'cause the last sentence implies that you will)!
This seems to me like a HP version of "Strwberries and Lace" of the "Naruto" fandom. From what I know of Harry's personality (maybe I should become a professional Harry psychologist) is that Harry always feels like he has to be in control of everything. He is independant and doesn't like being weak in front of anyone, especially after Cedric, Sirius, and Albus' deaths. I think that he likes doing this because he feels tat as "Golden BOY!Harry Potter" he can't have his moments of weakness that he, and every human being, needs. So, if he wears girly clothing, he is a "Girly and sub!Harry", so in that mode it's okay for him to be "weak", one mode is extremely strong and independant and the other is extremely fragile and sudmissive. And who is the best candidate to use him in that situation than his arch-rival, Draco Malfoy? I hope you continue this, it has a lot of potential for character and psychological development on Harry's side of the story, though I did note that your stories are dominated by Draco's "voice". Maybe you can explore Draco's reaction to Harry's fragile and extremist psyche.
Sorry, over-analysed and made a mountain out of a mole-hill, no? But I really enjoyed this piece of literature and I hope that you keep up the good work! Your stories are very enigmatic and psychologically intriguing!
IDM
This seems to me like a HP version of "Strwberries and Lace" of the "Naruto" fandom. From what I know of Harry's personality (maybe I should become a professional Harry psychologist) is that Harry always feels like he has to be in control of everything. He is independant and doesn't like being weak in front of anyone, especially after Cedric, Sirius, and Albus' deaths. I think that he likes doing this because he feels tat as "Golden BOY!Harry Potter" he can't have his moments of weakness that he, and every human being, needs. So, if he wears girly clothing, he is a "Girly and sub!Harry", so in that mode it's okay for him to be "weak", one mode is extremely strong and independant and the other is extremely fragile and sudmissive. And who is the best candidate to use him in that situation than his arch-rival, Draco Malfoy? I hope you continue this, it has a lot of potential for character and psychological development on Harry's side of the story, though I did note that your stories are dominated by Draco's "voice". Maybe you can explore Draco's reaction to Harry's fragile and extremist psyche.
Sorry, over-analysed and made a mountain out of a mole-hill, no? But I really enjoyed this piece of literature and I hope that you keep up the good work! Your stories are very enigmatic and psychologically intriguing!
IDM
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooooooo fucking HOT! and beautiful! wow!!! ^_^ i looooove bottom!harry!!!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahaha, that was pretty funny, well the end was. The middle... interesting choice of using second person POV. It's difficult to write and gives a definite feeling (which I suppose was the exact reason you chose it). I find it funny because I just recently made an icon with a pretty pink corset that says Slytherin across the bottom in cursive script, hehe. This just reminded me of that.
I liked it. It was good. I love sub!Harry, althuogh the cross dressing is usually not so good for me, but it wasn't described in huge details, so i'm okay ;)
I liked it. It was good. I love sub!Harry, althuogh the cross dressing is usually not so good for me, but it wasn't described in huge details, so i'm okay ;)
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I really really liked it. Especially the last bit, about Harry bein a Slytherin...but all of it was good. Keep up the good work.