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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing.
I started reading it today.
Every chapter I was hooked.
You have no idea how much this story makes me happy ^^
Great grammer, vocab, and plot.
YOU ARE AWESOME! xD
I started reading it today.
Every chapter I was hooked.
You have no idea how much this story makes me happy ^^
Great grammer, vocab, and plot.
YOU ARE AWESOME! xD
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dirty Harry:
Liked it! Seems to me that Harry fancies a bit Hermione. I like how you put their relation in here, it's similar to what I imagined till the sixth book came out. Loved Hermione in an apron and arguing with the elves! Lovely chapter!
Liked it! Seems to me that Harry fancies a bit Hermione. I like how you put their relation in here, it's similar to what I imagined till the sixth book came out. Loved Hermione in an apron and arguing with the elves! Lovely chapter!
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey
she got a REAL kiss!
i love the games they play but this time Malfoy was dead on serious! WOW!
verdi
she got a REAL kiss!
i love the games they play but this time Malfoy was dead on serious! WOW!
verdi
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha, loved the last line, as well as the entire chapter. Great job so far!
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was beautiful! Don't appologize for the dance-details. You detailed it nicely for the non-dancer and the dancer alike. It was great how you had Draco completly ( completly!!!!) off kilter with his mannerisims!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! your cliffies will be the death of me! please write more!
who will hermione pick and will she find out that draco kinda molested her? update please!
who will hermione pick and will she find out that draco kinda molested her? update please!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhh.
I'm so excited that Draco's finally making his move.
Poor Hermione though.
She's gonna be in a tough spot with all these boys competing for her.
Don't worry about using lyrics in your fiction.
I think it added, and was needed for this particular chapter.
Wonderful chapter once again.
Completely looking forward to the next :)
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Britt
I'm so excited that Draco's finally making his move.
Poor Hermione though.
She's gonna be in a tough spot with all these boys competing for her.
Don't worry about using lyrics in your fiction.
I think it added, and was needed for this particular chapter.
Wonderful chapter once again.
Completely looking forward to the next :)
x.
Britt
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord.. that kiss. That kiss. I was practically entranced, I swear. I pictured the whole thing while reading it but, weird.. those eyes were very similar to mine in my version *hmm...* Just to comment on what you think of your work : BORING? BORING? This chapter was so perfect I could see it and feel it and - fell in love with it. Continue.. new chapter.. please..
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Good stuff!!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused with what day this is. Is this right after? is this a month later? confused. i still like it though.