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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Jazzy
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i absolutly love A Knights Tale!!! And Johnny Depp & Heath Ledger!!! you should've put a pirates of caribbean qoute in here! hehe tht would've been awsome!! well keep up the good workk...can't wait to read the next chapter!! =] I'm hooked now! On I go!
person hplotrnerd@yahoo.com
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, I do hope you feel better, luckily I got done with the flu already. But excellet chapter, you can't imagine how upset I was by the confundus spell. And I love the way you write draco's thought, you made it so you can really feel for him, and poor poor hermione, can't wait for more! happy new year!
person Donavon
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story...but! Why are you back on top of the first page, when
obviously you have not updated a new chapter?

Please do not start correcting between chapters, just leave the problem to the next time.
Or, do what several writers do, check the chapter just after you update to ensure it is
okay;

Donavon
person Euthanasia
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a cliffhanger. :D
person Hoshi Sama
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh.

Draco's in the mire now...
person iluv2dance
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Can't say too much more than that! Bloody brilliant work! Hope you feel better again soon because I certainly want some more chapters to this baby VERY SOON!!! Can't wait!
person Ophelia Immortal
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! More please, please. The way my heart beats when they dance, how sweet and passionate their kises are. But Draco isn't drieven only by a potion induced Lust is he, is he....*fretting*
Am hoping Snape does not get to annoyed with the boys...
Please update soon
person JuliaChan
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never enjoyed a story this much, I must tell you!

I really like how you put more story into .. um, the original GoF. Love it!

<3

It was really cute in the end of the last chapter, and I wouldn't mind being in Hermione's place!
person Leading Angel
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Oh My Gosh! This story is one of teh best harry potter fanfics iv read yet! Wow complicated much? lol how the hell did you think of this. lol anyway i think you should probably get ron into the picture a tiny bit more and mayb in future chapters make hermione a little less confused by scratching out Victor and Harry from the 'Love Square' thingy. I love draco and Hermione fics. so cute and unexpected. K well the stories going great! Keep going and update soon.

(i think the Kiwi rugby player thing is so cute by the way)

bye
person Verdi
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I absolutely love your story! It's awesome! I also love your writing style! You're a very talented writer:) I can't wait to read the next chapter! Email me when you update! Take Care!