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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Natyslacks
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww this chapter was terribly cute and warmed the chockles (sp?) of my heart ^_^ I can't wait till the next chapter as this story is progressing very nicely and its great to read the filled in scenes your writing!
Update soon!
Love Natalie
person moxie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah...a very sweet chapter. Full of feeling. Lovely. Just lovely. thank you. And what a treat to get such a quick update!
person xenija
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Faster,Harder indeed .:-) You have a great story, I've started to read it recently and just can't get enough. I do hope you'll update soon. Interesting plot and great writing skills....I'm jus dying for more.....
person ITS ME
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The answer to the last qoute is "Say Anything"
good story so far keep it up
person lisa
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was funny. those poor house eleves traumatized by Hermione and lol Harry is so sweet and rescues Poor Winky from the evil Hermione lol.and ohh I love the talk around the lake. Awesome and funny and sooo thought provoking and tender. I loved it more more more please. Update soon please.
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I love it! Awesome story! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon. I usually write LM/HG stories myself. Some SS/HG but, I'm not that much on Harry/Hermione, That's too much like brother and sister to me, but Draco does nicely with her, and you have written a really cool story here. I can't wait to read more!

Shiloh
person Lilybean84
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome and amazing! I love your story! I know what you mean about reviews..I'm a new writer and so far I've learned getting a good review can make your day and can make you want to write even more;) Keep it up!
person lisa
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol I love it I love it. Hermione is on form and Draco seems perturbed. that was awesome. more more more please. I cannot wait to see them "kick it up a notch" lol. Please update soon.
person Yasmin
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the Victor/Hermione-thing that is going on. You write it so well!! Made me shiver...

Love to read what happens next!!
person Danielle
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this chapter was fun to read..
I loved that Draco was completely out of his element when Hermione didn't verbally attack him in the least..hee...
Can't wait for more =)