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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Chavela
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three~

OK... I need to be alone with that hot image of Viktor! Why is Hermione so damn lucky?! Awesome in so many ways, I love this story!
person Chavela
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4~

Gah, I am dragged deeper into this. All thae heat. The dancing, there was so much tention from Draco's end. It was intense.
person Chavela
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LUST~

Well, well. So he sees Viktor and Hermione and just attacks Pansy. And Pansy being the stupid one she always is, thinks he will love her for it. Gah, that girl is ignorant. LOL! And Viktor and Hermione were so hot, I wonder if you will include more stuff for Draco to come upon, that was so good.
person ShilohDarke
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I heard your request loud and clear, so, although someone else probably already explained... You know when you sign in to update your story? Well if you sign in and leave a review while you are still signed in, it makes your username a link to your profile. Simple really. (oh) I started Mirror's Reflection last year, that is true... but then I suffered a major writers block, plus my teen daughter was out of school and monopolized my computer, so I was a bit stuck for a while... And.. If you really want a story reminiscent of Phantom... Beauty Found Within the Beast is very much like a mixture between it's namesake and phantom.(Leave me a review if you go check it out, please? Or any of the other stories too... I love reviews!) I'm glad you liked MR. I just updated it... Ch 14 is up...

On to the review... I like how Hermione is being surrounded by all these different guys that like her... I think it will help to spur Draco into action if he decides he really wants her. I feel some regret for Ron and Harry... Of course you know, Ron is just still a clueless git who isn't emotionally mature enough yet to offer her anything real anyway yet... Harry... ah Harry... Well, See, I think he is really meant for Ginny... Anyway... I look forward to getting to read more! Soon, I hope... More Draco please!!!
person Rebecca
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! thanks for this great chapter! I can
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, I just read the first five chapters of this story, and I greatly enjoy it. So many men vying for hermiones attention, whats a girl to do? lol. that story you were talking about.. the edge of gravity... yeah i was reding it like last month or something and yup, its a great story. so, can't wait to see the next chapter!
person Katie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say, though this only has four chapters, I've found myself completely and utterly in love with it. The D/HR aspects AND supprisingly enough the H/HR ones too. You see, I adore Harry, he's got to be my favoite character to read about in fanfiction but I don't usually like him paired with anyone... but in this it somehow just -works.- Which I love you for.

Anyway, please update soon.
person RiddikulusSugarQuill
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a first time author and I never reviewed before I started writing a story. Once I started, I just couldn't get enough. It's frustrating and annoying trying to figure out if you should continue with a story or if no one really likes it because they aren't reviewing but I'd just like to tell you that you're doing a great job and writing a very interesting story. I like the way you've portrayed Hermione's first kiss because it was always something I wondered about. The physical part of the relationship. Anyway, not to drag on, but I hope you continue to finish this story and I'll try to come up with as much constructive criticism (mostly good, though!) that I can! :P
person crinna
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a rather fun little fic. i am realy enjoying reading it. keep up the good work.
person Natyslacks
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh I loved this chapter, Hermiones gonna kick some malfoy arse ^_^
I agree with the whole story and reviews thing. I stoped writing because of that, I'm tempted to start again (I'm much better at writing now) But I never have any spare time on my hands to sit down and concentrate on writing a fic, so I'm stuck doing it in bits and pieces then going over it all *sigh*
Anyway back to the sory, I just love this ic, its so unusual in a good way as its looking back at what happend through the Harry Potter series to form a story instead of doing it in year 7 or the future. So With that thought I will continue to read and also review (when I can, unfortunatly work takes up a sizable portion of my time..sucks I know)
I like your characterisation, and well if Draco had actually listened to Dumbledore when he was explaining the reasons for picking the two to teach he would realise that Hermione does ballet (so is very graceful:D)
Anyhoo, keep updating hun and I'm sure people will keep reading and reviewing!!
Love Natalie