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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Rebecca
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeez! that was really good! glad it wasn
person kazfeist
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have tried twice to leave an in-depth review of your work as well as a response to your comments at the beginning of this piece. The site will not let me do so. Perhaps that is why so few reviews exist.
person Dreamweaver
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I certainly didn't expect the chapter to end like that. LOL My my, poor Draco all stirred up and not even sure why. Loved the moment between Harry and Hermione as she was doing up her jumper. Such innocenced mixed up with unintentional longing and Viktor's kisses - wow, am beginning to feel a tad jealous. ;) Look forward to more.
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is to die for!! So hot!!
Love the little tease, thinking he followed Hermione out of the hall!!







person natyslacks
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!!! I did not expect Pansy, I thought it was Hermione haha! But wonderful all the same. I'm loving this fic, its seeing what goes on behind the books scenes and it all clicks into place ^_^
I cannot wait till the next chapter, so please update soon!
Love Natalie
person moxie
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa! that was amazing. wow. You had me there at the end - I thought he was assaulting Hermione! Poor Pansy though. Why is Draco such a brute? He seemed to have a soul for a second there, but then he regressed. And the scene with Viktor was beautiful, both from their perspective and how Draco saw them. Thank you so much for this chapter - it was a gift.
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a really awesome chapter. I loved it. Please tell me you will be updating soon! That just wasn't even fair! I want more! And it really surprised me. I thought Draco had Hermione and then you find out it's parkinson... Wow!

Ready for more...
Shiloh
person lisa
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Poor Hermione but lol she does have 2 men to comfort her. Which Potter does seem to really be touchy feely with her, I love it. She's very lucky. and now she has Draco obsessed with her. and omg Draco is usually the slytherin sex god but I suppose it has to start from here where he hardly has no experience. Can't wait for me. more more more please. Update soon please.
person lisa
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Also I'd like to say I thought for sure he followed Hermione. but it was Pansy who isn't the slytherin whore yet. She seemed so innocent there and Draco was such a git for using her. It made me feel bad for her. and the moments between Vicktor and Hermione were sweet and tender . Love the story. more more more please. Update soon please.
person Chavela
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 and 2!

WOW! I am already pulled so far into this story, it is so good, and the fact that Draco has already started in on Hermione, UGH! LOL! Draco is so annoying in a sexy way. LOL!
And then with Harry, what they hell was that? And Draco is already feeling the affects of Jealousy no matter how he labels it in his mind. LOL!

Awesome!

PEACE♥
Isa