rate_review Reviews

I loved the chapter. Sorry about your SUV.

Ohhhh... you are so CONNIVING! And I love it. LoL Leading us on to make us think it's something horrible. Tsk tsk. Nah, actually, I really love that about this story. So don't quit it. LoL Absolutely fantastic. I love how you fluidly play your plot into the GoF story; it works well. I really hope Harry comes to his senses soon so he and Hermione can have a good talk. Viktor somewhat worries me. It seems like he tries to show love through physical attention, and he may take it too far for her comfort-stage yet. Oh, and I admire the games you created with Hermione and Harry; they're really endearing. "The-Boy-Who" game is my favorite so far! Great idea! No Cho in this plot? That's ok; she's annoying anyways. LoL Soooo... I also love your writing. A lot of people don't proof their writings or try to make proper use of English, and they look like crap. But you do a good job of grammer and spelling. I commend you! Brilliant job! Please continue soon!

I'm sorry about being broken into, that sucks monkey balls! Urrrgh, if there was anyway to track them down, we could all give them a piece of our minds, and get the stuff back of course.
Ok, I'm going to confess something to you now.. I really like Harry/Hermione pairing.. I just don't tell anyone else.. strange I know >_< But I loved this chappie, Naughty naughty Hermiones got a hicky ^_^
And I confess my mind was going on pervy overtime when I started reading th begining of the last scene.. all sweaty etc... I bet you intentionally did that.. like the last chapter. you naughty naughty person ;-)

But on response to you response to my last review, I might just post something here. I'm working on it now and now I am ill *coughs,sniffles and sneezes* (I have something like the flu but not as bad) I might be able to write more as I won't be working.
Anyhoo, Update soon!
Love Natalie

accio.....reviews! oh you are good at thowing us off our thought paths! First Pansy and now...a shoe!! lol fun fun fun

Stupid Harry. I wanna cuddle him and knock him over the head. LOL! And that kiss... OOOOOOHHHH Hermione needs to watch those happy lips with everyone. LOL!

Jealousy is such a wonderful thing, you can always see someone's true feelings when it comes to jealousy, I find that is the only time you can not wear your mask. Great chapter!!!!!!

LOVE IT!

PEACE♥

I adore this story!

You really got me in chapter 6 but then I thought Hermione would not do that

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*gasp* Whoa, whoa, whoa! What was THAT?! Ok, so was that him using Pansy and dreaming of Hermione (I think and I hope), or was it him thinking of Parkinson all along?!
Anyway, great chapter but I hope the D/Hr relationship will start to move along faster! I love you're writing and think this story is great. Good job!

OH MY FREAKING GOD! You. Are. So. Cruel. I swear to God, after reading that last line, I literally sagged sideways off my chair and fell to the floor in a crumpled heap. Luckily, there was no-one up here so no-one wondered why I had turned temporarily into a sack of potatoes. But SERIOUSLY! That was SO GOOD! I was convinced it was Hermione all the way through! And I was thinking "oh my god, this is going way too fast, no, the story shall be RUINED" and then... "Don't confuse lust for love, Parkinson." ACK! I thoroughly enjoyed reading the last few chapters. I think my favourite scene was the dancing one. Go Hermione, go dance the night away! And you mentioned JOHNNY DEPP *squee* However, there was one line that i think you could have revised a little. Hang about, let me find it... "Something in Draco turned upside down in his stomach. Hadn

your car got broken into?? oh no! that's the worse. I'm sorry. But how did you get it together to update. wow! I loved this chapter too. You really write dynamics between characters wonderfully.

Yay good chappies. love it. and lol Hermione is so oblivious but still neither of the boys have a right to treat her that way. You sooze you lose Harry.lol. can't wait to see what happens next man. more more more please. Update soon please. and I am so sorry to hear about the break in of your suv. that does suck. hope things get better. my thoughts and prayers are with you.