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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person moxie
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. god. wow. dude. i want more. wow.
person natyslacks
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok..... I feel so silly now, but this chapter made me swoon... Yes, swoon... I don't know what got into me. I don't normally do that at fanfiction. But it might have been the setting, atmosphere, characters andjust wow the writing. But I loved this chapter. I felt like I was in Hermiones shoes and the discription of Draco just made me want to be there physically.
*Inserts random fan girl squee* Thank you, this is one of my fave chappies you've done so far and I cannot wait till the next one!!!
So please update soon!
Love Natalie *Goes of into her own fantasy ::sigh::*
person Chavela
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8~

SCREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I can not believe he is acting like this. That is so damn hot! I am just melting from it all! *gushes* That was just too much!!!!!

MORE. I am begging for it.
person reggieb is a girl
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! Now write me more! Ooooo dancer!Draco is so very, very yummy. I must say that I'm loving your story, even if the time line isn't one of my favorites (I am, I'm sad to say, a sucker for the last year of school or anything post-Hogwarts when it comes to my fanfiction, I'm not much for the whole they're-ganna-be-at-school-for-a-while-longer setting. But I'll bend the rules just for you). Yay keep up the great writing!
person Bethalina
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sat and read the whole thing... damn good... love the ending of your latest chapter... i was giggling because i can actually picture it...cant wait for your next update... cheers***
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ay Dios mio. Hot. Definatley hot.
person Avanell
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tarantellegra? Ha-ha! I know that dance ;)
person lisa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermi0one driven from her sanctuary. and wow quite steamy . Yay Draco I didnt think he'd actually do it.Awesome story. Please update soon. more more more please.
person Ravensblood
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are making me shiver, my dear, oh god please update soon....
I love your Draco. I really do. I love the way your entire plot folds in so very well with the book. How do you do it? I must know!
person deeply.jaded
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About chap 7:
I just love the way Harry is reacting. So Harry has some what of a dark side..huh? Love it, gives me goosebumps. You really display an interesting Harry, not a poof!!
And how naive is Hermione, it's rediculous really and so much fun at the same time!!!
I'm really enjoying your story.

Yasmin

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