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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person mandy-jg
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read all of this, and there is no more for now! *sigh* I really like this, the going between all three boys with Hermione (V/H/Dr), look forward to more soon! :)
person Dreamweaver
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry. And he tried so hard too. Or maybe I should say poor Hermione with all the male attention she suddenly has. Loved the dance scene too. There's nothing like a slow seduction. *evilgrin*
person lisa
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh dear Draco is up to something!!! and Harry. lol way to go Harry!!!!!
Hermione sure left in a hurry. wait til Ron finds out. Omg major drama I can see it now. Awesome chappie and awesome story. More more more. Please update soon.
person moxie
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god...what, exactly, is Draco planning? Why is he such an ass? and how has he been tormenting Hermione? What a sweet chapter. I really love the dynamics between Harry and Hermione. And is was nice to finally see Draco as a (semi) normal person goofing around like any 15-yr old guy with his buddy even though they were plotting... And interesting tidbit about 15 yr. old Slytherin boys...
person Puma
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a good writer. I hope you update soon. This a very interesting story.
person Ravensblood
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What? I, mean, what happened right after Draco was all over Hermione? How did she get away? What did Draco think about it at the time? I need to know! (Unless, you're going to flash back to it at some point?.... please?0
Great writing about Harry, and what has Draco got up his sleeve? I AM INTRIGUED.
TELL MEEEEEEE
person tabz
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
True story... I haven't been on this site in a bit so I was catching up on the last few chapters of this story. While reading I had a Josh Groban cd playing on my computer. Just at the middle of chapter 8 'So She Dances' came on. Its a great song about a man watching a woman waltzing. He gets more into her as the dance goes on. The song was made for this story!! If you have a chance you should listen to it.

Also I feel I should apologise I'm one of those bad people you talk about who don't review. But I love this story and have been properly guilted. I'll review each chapter from now on. Promise. Sooo...next chapter please! ;)
person Andrea
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story! Keep up the great work. Sry this is so short but i look forward to reviewing the next chapters.
person Sapphire1
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the Harry/Draco/Victor love square. The ending line of chptr 8 had me dropping my drink from shock & laughter what a treffic line. From now on I will not be read any additional chptrs with a drink in my hand. Can't wait 4 the upcoming chptrs.
person Cateye
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hot,I love fan fics based in the GOF and the Yule Ball.Even with the tourament and the Dark Lord coming back,it seems like it's the last book thay really got to be teenagers in.You're doing a great job writing the life of a teenager too. Can't wait for more.