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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person moxie
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh.my.god. whoo!! hot. What is that little rascal up to?? What the hell is in that crystal?? Damn him. But thank YOU. Thank you for the *two* chapter updates. How lucky are we?? Please update soon and stop teasing us!
person lisa
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY more hint of lemony goodness!!!! It's definitely worth waiting for. I love the story. more more more more, Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next.
person Gloria
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! *does happy dance* Update soon!
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My FUCKING GOD! That was... But you...Oh! How could you end it there? And what will she think when she finds out? And DAMN!!! I Love it! I have to have the next chapter NOW! WRITE! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! Harry who??? CRAP!... Calm... breathing deeply... thinking peaceful thoughts... :-P You realize I'm going to get no sleep tonight!

SD
person Chavela
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so awesome! SO AWESOME!

It was worth the wait! I know you are big on Harry/Hermione but I was going crazy with them, I needed some more Viktor and Draco, and got the both, literally. LOL! Draco becoming Viktor and seducing Hermione was too brilliant. Hermione is a smart girl though, I wonder after tonight, how long it will take for her to figure it all out. I have faith that her brains won't let our sexy Slytherin get away with this.

Please more!

PEACE♥
person Moonie
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GAWD! HOLY CRAP! That was so erotic!

Just a few kisses and they were both undone! I can so SEE this ... I could feel it!

THANK YOU!!!!! It was AWESOME! MORE MORE MORE MORE! LOL

person natyslacks
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO I laughed so much at the last part, how Krum was well endowed, I would have expected it ;-) Just too funny ^_^ And yay another chapter, loving it so far. The plot just keeps getting more and more involved. And I can't wait till the next chapter so please update soon!
Love Natalie
person Chavela
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Cain
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The upside down kiss was tittilating! I've had that kiss before... nothing quite like it! It brought back evil yet fond memories.

Hermione is so young... no wonder she can't tell up from down and is easily swayed.

LOL @ Draco flexing his new bod... will he get to put it to good use? 0_0

I'm hooked. Now reel me in!
person lisa
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Harry got in a lil snog with Hermione til her comscience interrupted. and lol Blaise is still scared of Viktor. and Draco omg lol feeling his newly aquired physique. and the carrying to the left lol I lmao. that was just an awesome chappie. a hint of lemons, plotting, and serious decieving going on. Love it. More more more. Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next.